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Gossamer Wings [Haiku]
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Gossamer Wings [Haiku] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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soft she cries, gently hides behind gossamer wing her sad heart to stroke ~ ~ ~ in twilight song, sings lonely sounds of rhapsody never to be free ~ ~ ~ soft she sings gently on gossamer wing to fly freedom comes with time ~ ~ ~ < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wings to fly...courage to try...such a sweet sad song...beautiful |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh these hit home with me this morning......love these Sunshine, they are beautiful.  -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Another home run. Keep 'em coming Brightness. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very lovely they are tied together yet stand alone as well truly wings of the gossamer |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula, thank you... SEA, aren't we a pair?... Interloper, {~,^} thank you VAS...and WELCOME again to Passions! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
"freedom comes with time" liked this last line muchly |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunshine- these are ALL so beautiful. i love them! -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
written with a beautiful gentleness.......I loved it! Tender and quiet. Soft and delicate. Beautiful. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your names do not allow always for knowledge of a gender in part, so thank you all, that you come and read, and accept my render of write... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful, wise words "freedom comes with time," yes, I love this!~ One of your best haikus~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Such fragile beauties ...~ *Hugs* ~*MargeInArchives*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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