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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-16 11:39 AM




soft she cries, gently
hides behind gossamer wing
her sad heart to stroke

~ ~ ~

in twilight song, sings
lonely sounds of rhapsody
never to be free

~ ~ ~

soft she sings gently
on gossamer wing to fly
freedom comes with time

~ ~ ~

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Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-11-16 11:48 AM


Wings to fly...courage to try...such a sweet sad song...beautiful
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Oh these hit home with me this morning......love these Sunshine, they are beautiful.   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-11-16 01:01 PM


Another home run.  Keep 'em coming Brightness.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2000-11-16 01:04 PM


very lovely

they are tied together

yet stand alone as well

truly wings of the gossamer

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5 posted 2000-11-16 01:54 PM


Paula, thank you...

SEA, aren't we a pair?...

Interloper, {~,^}

thank you VAS...and WELCOME again to Passions!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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6 posted 2000-11-16 06:16 PM


"freedom comes with time"

liked this last line muchly

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7 posted 2000-11-16 06:19 PM



Sunshine-
   these are ALL so beautiful.  
   i love them!  
  
   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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8 posted 2000-11-16 06:41 PM


written with a beautiful gentleness.......I loved it!   Tender and quiet.  Soft and delicate.  Beautiful.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-11-16 08:46 PM


Your names do not allow always for knowledge of a gender in part, so thank you all, that you  come and read, and accept my render of write...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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10 posted 2001-02-17 09:12 PM



Beautiful, wise words "freedom comes with time," yes, I love this!~ One of your best haikus~

Take care,
Melissa~

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11 posted 2002-10-20 03:16 PM


Karilea~
Such fragile beauties ...~
*Hugs*
~*MargeInArchives*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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