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Skating on Stars............
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Skating on Stars............ |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
She struggled to get her fleece on But those wings just got in her way, She needed to dress up warmly, So she could go outside and play. Pulling her boots on her little feet, And her hat down over her ears, She ran out the door in a flurry, To a choir of sweet angel cheers. Their halos atilt on their little heads, As they flew around in the sky, Giggling as they tumbled about, A sparkle in each little eye. Soon some were skiing down rainbows, And some were skating on stars, Others were sledding down a hill, Faster than most earthly cars. These tiny little cherubs, With faces all aglow, Leaving heartprints everywhere, Called angels in the snow. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love it, I'm framing it, I'm handing it out to friends... how much do you charge for writing the Perfect Piece? This has hugs written all over it, my friend.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thanks for reading Karilea ~ you are far too kind my friend. Bonnie |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bonnie~ seriously, you need to send this to Hallmark.......oh I just love this, it would make a beautiful Christmas card!  -SEA |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ohh, I loved this...winter is one of my favorite times of year, so the idea of angels playing in the snow was so sweet... Elizabeth |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA ~ Thanks so much for reading and for your kind reply. Elizabeth ~ I love winter too, and it's a good thing since it looks like it'll be here for awhile now. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks. Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is really Disney animated genius! I loved every word of it ..made my heart warm! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Their halos atilt on their little heads, As they flew around in the sky, Giggling as they tumbled about, A sparkle in each little eye. Soon some were skiing down rainbows, And some were skating on stars, ============= Bonnie ..this is just precious... your imagery is such a delight.. each time I read one of your poems..I think here is yet another one that needs to be illustrated and turned into a childrens book. wonderful poetry dear... take care jm |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ethome ~ Thanks so much for the wonderful reply, glad you enjoyed. JM ~ Wow, you are much too kind, thank you so much. Bonnie |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I opened this thinking "what an excellent title!" The poem far surpasses it. You create and carry a magical beautiful picture. I am saving. Thank you so much for sharing. Just excellent!!!!! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dreamkeeper ~ Thanks so much for reading and for your kind reply, so glad you enjoyed. Bonnie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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