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Passions Gallery--Severn (the river)
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Passions Gallery--Severn (the river) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the river flows through her w i n d i n g its path through her heart taking her away on a wave of p a s s i o n we stand on the bank and watch her f l o w by marvelling at her wonder her depth the deep blue of her c o l o r s our eyes and fills our hearts with its joy ----------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is sooooo Kamla ... Yes, our poet of wonder - wandering ! Marvelous ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is excellent. I love the way you have crafted it! Marie~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, this is marvelous, and she is going to be thrilled...this is perfect...fantastic...and it could only belong to our Little K.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a waterfall of words..lovely sven..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sven--she is full and flowing...just like a river..and more. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Cool layout my friend. Thanks for the look at Severn. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful poem. Very much like a river. Beautifully done. Poeminister There is pleasure in the pathless woods there is rapture on the lonely shore there is society where none intrudes by the deep sea, and music in its roar I love not man the less but nature more --Byron |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, She does color us with her words. She is a river that will forever flow through my heart Great work, Sven Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sven...I don't know what to say. This is...satpsych!!! Utterly...I was making a comment last night on string poems and how they can be hard to do well.. and lo and behold - here is one for me! Done well, and it amazes me that this is how you see my writing... (and Marge(y), Kari, Martie and Lizzy) Thankyou for including me in your gallery of poets - I really appreciate it, Sven. K |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Sven not only is this clever and fun ...its also true - and it must have been a lot of effort to do...LOL liked a lot Philip |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Our severn is a sweetheart and you have captured her essence quite well...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Very kewl poem just like Severn. write on Kethry. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is lovely and so like K,we travel her poetic waters upstream and down "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is lovely and so like K,we travel her poetic waters upstream and down "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . for reading, for your comments. . . they are apprciated. . . K, thank you for your words, I've gathered much from your writing for a long time. . . I'm glad that you liked my "string poem", it just came to me. . . honest. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
severn is the word is the word sevurn is the way that we say it doo doo doo severn's the word likes it lots sven yuh |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm just positively blushing here at you guys...and had to say thanks again to you all... hugs Sven K |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Walt, thanks for the word my friend. . . Severn, you're blushing? Thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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