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that's gooooood Heidi-cake! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Eight dreams of empty need, three salt licks; the promise of tomorrow. Mix well with self-loathing, gold foil and sparkle hearts. Serve cold on a summer afternoon. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
empty need...still thinking on that one....does the emptiness create the need or vice versa? e me on that please.... I do love your compositions, especially this, in it's seeming simplicity. I do know the thrill of cheap thrills. And the fruitlessness of that. I like this much, Mike. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ 'eight dreams of empty need' handful of despirate greed twisted smiles beneath the weed your words I eagerly read ok ok, so I don't do it like you, but I really like that line  very cool. -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is there some kind of play on words there to serve a Heidi-cake cold on a summer afternoon ......great fun I'm off to find the ingredients??? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
To all who replied, Thanks for the self-indulgence.  Mike |
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