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Responding to Sunshine's challenge . . . nature haiku
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Responding to Sunshine's challenge . . . nature haiku |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interloper takes up the gauntlet ~ The fish swims upstream The hook stops her instinct dead A family fed < !signature--> Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Did the basis for this come from an Indian lullaby? Just kidding! very good job...ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
small fry yield big fish casting nets upon waters big fish fry for us hey...found the first one last! This is great...you did wonderful! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ethome ~ I shot an arrow into the air ... and this is what came down. Sinshine ~ One-upped again. Shux! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Another one I like very much.......I really like this haiku thing! I'm gonna practice!  -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA - You know you do everything well. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you just captured the life of a fisherman within 17 syllables...im impressed  |
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