Always (response to Desparado's you can't scare me)

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Always (response to Desparado's you can't scare me)

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 2000-11-15 11:44 AM

If I could open
your skin and
hide inside of you
I would.
If merging my mind
and my
body
to you is the only way
to know safety...
then I will.
I want to be there
where you are
so close
that words don't
matter and
the beating of
my heart
beside yours
will tell you everything
I'm afraid to say.

Yes, I'm scared.
I've always been scared.
I rage against fear
with every touch I
give and
recieve.
Pleasure seems to
matter so little
on the cosmic scale
of you and I.

"How can I
tell you
no?"
I want to know
that you are inside
of me always
as I sleep
in a make believe bed.
Dreaming of you there
even when you're not.
"your body and mine lost in their own agenda
entwined in a furry of desperation
minds connecting as though welded together
no release or accepting embrace
just two people lost
in a sea of dreams..."
Thats right baby.
I'm always scared.

Here is the link to Desparados poem, it may help to read it /pip/Forum42/HTML/003093.html

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

[This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 11-15-2000).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-11-15 01:38 PM

I found this little gem floating down the board and I don't know why because it is just excellent poetry ...A extremely good read... sure you're scared but no different than all the rest by times ...good work!!!!

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2000-11-15 03:36 PM

Thanks very much ethome, I didn't originally intend to post this as a separate poem, but, I'm glad I did

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2000-11-15 04:13 PM

Well done. Glad I stopped by.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-11-15 07:01 PM

Well, it certainly is its own poem, and quite deserving of its own space.. Very nice, Saxoness..

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

5 posted 2000-11-16 08:53 AM

Thanks Nan

I could have been totally off-base with my interpretation of Des' poem, but, oh well lol

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-06 08:05 PM

pretty neat

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