navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Ashes & Dust
Open Poetry #10
Post A Reply Post New Topic Ashes & Dust Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-11-15 10:50 AM


"Ashes & Dust"

Years of pretending I had moved on
And that the pain had begun to ease
Now has been blown away
All that remains is ashes and dust
Every-thing else removed by a powerful breeze

Never did I think you would contact me
Too many years have passed on by
But when that phone rang
Tears of sadness, anger, and happiness
Flowed freely, and I let my soul cry

Really thought I didn't care any longer
Whether you cared or not
But I realize I lied to myself
That all years did was complicate things
So many feelings have been buried deep in my heart

You cut me so deep so long ago
Piercing my soul and heart with that jagged knife
I learned how to say goodbye
Learned it quite well in fact
Head held high I moved on with my life

However, I didn't...it was just bittersweet lies
My soul and heart is still locked by chains
Now you have come back to start anew?
The tears that I cried and years I spent forgetting you
Was it for nothing? Now that dust and ashes are all that remains

As quickly as you came, you left into the black of night
Leaving me with broken pieces of my heart once again
I just needed you to know
My forgiveness I give to you freely
Now I will pick up the pieces as my heart begins to mend

Turning my face towards blue skies
I let the sun kiss my face, as the pain slowly passes
Praying with all of my heart
That when the storm is over
Something more remains than dust and ashes



© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-11-15 11:12 AM


Amy, that breeze is known as a sirroco...

and I am here smiling on you...



and this is for you: www./pip/Forum42/HTML/003102.html
< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-15-2000).]

Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2000-11-15 11:18 AM


Amy, this is so full of your feelings, full to the brim of all this emotion that has been stired up. Amy love, I'm not going to give you advice, because one it's useless at a time like this, and two you are going through this and I'm not. It is pointless for me to say slam the door on those feelings and bury them again. Not least because that only causes them to fester and turn into wounds of deep pain. All I will say is if you need to touch some reality and with someone who isn't so close to the situation to see a bit more of the whole picture please remember that you have a world of friends here. Please feel free to call me at any time, I may not be able to do much, but I can listen with the best of them, it's my job you know. (I run a switchboard, do nothing but listen all day long.   ) take care of yourself and your love, you will come through this, it won't be easy but you will come through I know.
This is so well written, wonderfully well written.
Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
Warm hugs to you

dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2000-11-15 11:24 AM


Ah, you are not alone in the face of such pain. I have felt this pain before myself, though I can not imagine being thrown into the pain again by reuniting with him.
I give you strength and energy, dear, to survive this.
*Smiles for you*

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-11-15 03:23 PM


Sunshine--
yes that describes this wind perfectly.
thank you for your reply.  

marsha--
well you know how i feel about you. thank
you for your sweet comment and for the
talk today. you are a very good friend
and i am glad we have met. take care.

dragon--
thank you. i am going to need that
strength. unfortunately its not about
a lost love that's come back...well
not in the sense of a romantic lost
love, its about my biological mother...
but thank you for your kind words. they
are much appreciated.

take care all of you.
love,
amy

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-11-15 03:29 PM


Amy,
*HuGS*. If you need to email me.
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
6 posted 2000-11-15 04:20 PM


Turning my face towards blue skies
I let the sun kiss my face, as the pain slowly passes
Praying with all of my heart
That when the storm is over
Something more remains than dust and ashes
=========================================
It has. It does.  It is you ... all of you.  A very wonderful and talented you.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
7 posted 2000-11-15 04:42 PM


'Turning my face towards blue skies
I let the sun kiss my face, as the pain slowly passes
Praying with all of my heart
That when the storm is over
Something more remains than dust and ashes'

Aim, this is beautifully written.  Loved the ending!  *HUGE HUGS* to you, my friend.  You are a strong woman, and there is nothing you can't overcome.  Listen to me, getting all mushy.  But, really, this is a powerful expression of your heart, and it was a wonderful read.  So, you know that if you need to, you can always ô¿ô!  

Love ya, girlie!
sp


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2000-11-15 06:32 PM


Amy,
I am touched by your emotions in this poem. Please remember to email me if you wish. I do have good listening abilities. Take it easy.

"You cut me so deep so long ago
Piercing my soul and heart with that jagged  knife
I learned how to say goodbye
Learned it quite well in fact
Head held high I moved on with my life"

That last line says quite a great deal.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
9 posted 2000-11-15 11:31 PM


Lynne-
thanks for the *hug*...and thanks
for reading. take care.  

Interloper-
thanks for that sweet compliment.
you make a girl smile...  

kris-
your reply has deeply touched my heart.
thank you for your friendship and for
your understanding. take care.  

Daniel-
i am glad i touched you...that means a lot
to me. and also thanks for the "shoulder."
perhaps i'll take you up on your offer.
take care of yourself.


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

10 posted 2000-11-16 02:50 PM


As quickly as you came, you left into the black of night
Leaving me with broken pieces of my heart once again
I just needed you to know
My forgiveness I give to you freely
Now I will pick up the pieces as my heart begins to mend

Turning my face towards blue skies
I let the sun kiss my face, as the pain slowly passes
Praying with all of my heart
That when the storm is over
Something more remains than dust and ashes

===============

"My forgiveness I give to you freely
Now I will pick up the pieces as my heart begins to mend"

your already half way there sweetie...
and you are much stronger than you know ...
I'v already seen your strength too many times ...
the reasons of why will be answered in time ...
and you will accept them with your usual grace ...
love to you sweetie
me


Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding ...
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
jm

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

11 posted 2000-11-16 06:22 PM


A heartfelt expression of your heart Amy.
*hugs* Hon

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
12 posted 2000-11-16 06:31 PM


I could feel the tenseness of your reunion after such a terrible hurt....but that's good writing when you can make the reader share your perspective...This nervousness jumped out of your lines and filled me with anticipation of the outcome....great how you used the title words to make the seriousness of your situation stand out...I like this very much!!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
13 posted 2004-04-18 08:57 PM


you know my heart is still wth you
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Ashes & Dust

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary