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Precious Moments
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
precious moments "I like you." The moment you spoke those words so sweet it reminded me of the first time I met you the very first day our eyes would meet. Twas only for a short time but I knew I liked you right away so we shared some precious moments than I promised we would meet on another day. A day that proved not to so very far away as I recalled the comfort my heart felt while in your care. And now we spend lots of time together precious moments in which we share. "I like you." Sweet words thast mean so much to me. They really soften my heart and bring back so many precious memories. I remember resting on your shoulder feeling so peaceful and content. I told you how beautiful you are to me so sweet and heavenly sent. You seemed so close to me and I felt so close to you. Making me feel as if you really cared for me as much as I care for you. And now I'm longing more each day for more of love's sweet caress. More times to spend together to last forever in silky innocence. And by now you must surely know that "I like you too." And I will always share these desires within my heart while spending precious moments with you. Jameslee@November14,2000 |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The best love is those that start with I LIKE YOU. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very nice poem, James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is so sweet! Yes, true love starts with true "like"  -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love follows friendship like a little puppy. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a great poem of appreciation and love...goood!! stuff!! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
I would like to know a like that would keep on growing until it reached love. I think I must believe you are a very romantic person from your words. Your thoughts summon me to read more of what you have written. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, this is another of your poetic gems, amazing, write. Really, love this one, it's true the best love starts with like. Great poem as usual. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very beautiful James....damn how many times have I've told you that(ha, ha)....anyways I truly enjoyed reading this...great job and peace! Nathan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And now I'm longing more each day for more of love's sweet caress. More times to spend together to last forever in silky innocence. ============= mmm mmm mmm what a lovely sweet read that verse is... wonderful writing SBJ ... so sincere and kissed with anticipation. later-silky innocence-gator jm |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked it a lot!!!!!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thank each one of you for the lovely responses...James |
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