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Lloyd Junior Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 17Torquay, Vic. Australia |
Hi to everyone It's been some time since I last visited and I must say I am really impressed with all the changes. The quality of what I read here is amazing and it's with a little trepidation that I'm putting my toe back in the water again. Nothing ventured nothing gained !!! *** Destiny Bright lion caged. Fierce desire flamed by nights promise and sweet Venus gift. Held in check by more than bars. Confused by her need for his strength. Jealous of his power. Angry at the whip, but compliant. Freedom – the punishing reward. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lloyd~ I wasn't here when you were, so I want to say hello, and glad to see you've come back!  This is a wonderful poem and I liked it very much! -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Lloyd..... Great poem, and welcome back!! I'd say just jump right in, my friend.....it's so good to have you back!!  Follow your dream! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome back..i wasnt here either but i am now ..ha...enjoyed your poem.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Lloyd, Welcome back. I hope you stay for a while. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lloyd Junior Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 17Torquay, Vic. Australia |
Thanks for the welcome. I hope I can contribute in some small way to this wonderful site... and thanks for the nice words - we all need them to some extent |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome Lloyd I really like this work you wrote a wonderful metaphorical poem of illustrative wisdom...good stuff!! |
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