Open Poetry #10 |
Moving On |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Moving On Remembering all the beautiful things we did together, the love we shared, the fun we had, the spats, the bloody fights, make-up time, those fabulous nights of oh gee, my gosh, WOW! Remembering the kisses, and the hugs, the missing... when you were out of town, at work, or in the next room. Remembering all the things we were, that are gone now... dog puke! because I caught you with him/her! Remembering the way I wanted to break your nose, dislocate your arm, rip out your heart, and then, remembering those beautiful words... I love you, and remembering all that we did, together, the love we shared, and the memories that'll live in my heart, till I die. Remembering that it's time to go, to say goodbye, so long, be well my friend, our time has gone. Remember me as I'm remembering you... remembering... I loved you then. w. james beard, jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ You know this is awesome don't you? So very true.....it works that way...... -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
jwesley..... Oh, yes, this is really awesome!! I agree with SEA..........I love the ending. Follow your dream! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JW* Memories can keep us warm or chill us to the bone...just depends on which ones you pull out to look at...here's to many warm nights!! Great work~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sea - don't know about awesome, but it does work that way at times, doesn't it? Sunny1 - thanks my friend, glad you liked. BDC - Yep, they can warm or chill, but all go into making you who you are. And teach; it's up to you to learn. jwesley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well damn...you said it all...all the love all the anger all the pain...wrapped up in memories...like spider webs in the corner of your mind |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
jw- a fine piece you have wove here that's for sure. poignant and written with true style. you have captured your memories along w/ your feelings quite beautifully if i might say. take care, and here's to making new better memories. take care. ~amy~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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