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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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today I cried my heart out left with just it's shell my tears like rivers, swollen my thoughts of empty, swell the dike had burst, releasing all the penetrating hurt was more than one could hold inside a death defying flirt. silence reigns now, inner soul myst becomes my shroud peacefulness has disappeared a challenge not allowed reflecting eyes, in darkened light memories too painful to hold just one more night, of yo-yoing forgive me, once more told. you've killed the taste of you, once more the bitterness wins out thoughts betrayed, a wall to build reality's a doubt the winds of torture follow me each day, a yo-yo strung inside you've taken what was me and placed me there among all the meaningless in life peeling soft my skin hardening the cover now protecting all within what was is gone, what will may be but one thing known for sure this edge of me, once hostaged to imprisons me once more. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ this just breaks my heart.....I hope it isn't what you are going through......I send you warm hugs!!  -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I don't know what happened to my last reply but I'll have to start over here. You've got the reality of pain in the heart flowing through this piece...the reader gets wrapped up in the bitterness that once was the closeness of love...good stuuf !! really very good read!! I like the hostaged idea very much...ethome.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I hope next year holds alot of happiness and love in store for you hon..i have a feeling it will..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
nakdthoughts ~ Once again you live up to your moniker! ================================== you've killed the taste of you, once more the bitterness wins out thoughts betrayed, a wall to build reality's a doubt the winds of torture follow me ================================== Sadly wonderful... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
one feels the chill here Wynter. . . sad. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can feel your sadness...you have expressed yourself quite well... ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm really sorry, I shouldn't have even posted when feeling like this today, I thank you all for such caring replies... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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