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Gemini
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0 posted 2000-11-14 02:22 PM


You & me
An us, a we.
If only it could be.

You & I
Across the sky.
Oh, how we could fly.

A you for me.
Across the sea.
To love an eternity.

An us, a we.
To love forever free.
Dear God, please let it be.


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-14 03:00 PM


Gemini~ I know this ache of want...you wrote of it perfectly. -SEA
ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-14 03:07 PM


Gemini I really love how you have written this with the word play it's really clever and a good write!!  Reminds me of the old Turtles song Happy Together...ethome


Sven
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3 posted 2000-11-14 06:36 PM


Here's hoping that it will be. . .

wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Gemini
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4 posted 2000-11-14 08:08 PM


SEA-Thank you for stopping by and appreciate your understanding.
ethome-Thank you for your kind words.
Sven-How sweet of you to say, thank you so much.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-11-14 08:43 PM


Such soft and tender thoughts...simply beautiful~
Gemini
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6 posted 2000-11-15 02:34 PM


Butterflies-Thank you for your kind response.
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