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Spirit Dance |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Transfixed by your wondrous thoughts That are sent to me each night, I brush my fingers against the cheek Of your ethereal face. I take your hands in mine, And press them to my lips. All the while my eyes gaze deeply into yours, A fire burning deep within. The distance is no obstacle, When our spirits come alive To dance among the clouds. Our shadows intermingle, As the dance carries us higher and higher Past the clouds and into the stars That match our internal fire. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Internal, eternal fires...flame away...  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
There is something magical when two spirits mingle excellent poem. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That is a beautiful soaring spirit flight you took to dance amoung the clouds and what a dance it is...great mental images for the reader's senses to grasp...good stuff I'd say!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely done my friend. Hope you gave it to her... jwesley |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A treat for my eyes tonight, MI. Your writing is getting more and more beautiful as is your heart.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nicely done, Philip... Keep the good work coming... I'm enjoying seeing your stuff agin'...  |
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