Open Poetry #10 |
Leaving Behind |
BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Leaving behind all the happiness I breathe in deeply to all the freshness aorund me. I am exposed to new surroundings. Is this the place that I once called home? I ask myself. I move forward leaving behind memories, that had once ment so much to Me. Time, grasping to the past won't make you feel any better. My Counscience whispers to Me. Leaving Behind the smiles, the tears, those times a the pizza place. Could it be possible to grow and learn from new experiences with out those important to you? I ask myself. I turn back and smile and leave all those behind once more to explore a new beginning that I don't want. I promise, that I won't leave you behind, I will come back to you That I promise. I won't leave you behind. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is never easy to walk forward to something new in life but you will be surprised at how wonderful it feels years from now. Hold onto whatever you leave behind as you will always want to revisit to recapture those special moments. Great write! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you keep your promise. It hurts being left behind. I like your poem. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just remember. . . that sometimes, it's not easy to keep your promises. . . excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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