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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-11-14 09:12 AM





Wonc eye seen a son sett
Uppon thuh oshun bloo
Sittin inn sum whet send
Dreemin uf u,

Thuh ski wuz fulla clowds
Urang an peenk
Fur wonc eye tuuk tym
Tu jesst sitt an fink

Uf ur swaweet kiises
Ur speshal tu mee
Tho ur faar awy noow
Ohnlee u eye c.

Thuh moooooon es rysin
Hi abuv thuh errth soh rond
Ur trulee thuh ohnlee
Luvv eye evverr fond.

Coreeen Baeeelee


© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-14 09:34 AM


Corinne~
If this wasn't so gosh-darned adorable,
I'd send you back to bed to finish your sleep !

LOL !  
Have a great day - when you wake up !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Parker
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2 posted 2000-11-14 09:35 AM


inlease leesons cooming lonng fyne.
nice too c U in luvv.  


Park

Corinne
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3 posted 2000-11-14 09:56 PM


Thanks, Marge!  Just phonetically spellin, ya know?  


Tancu, Parrrrk!

Corinne

passing shadows
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4 posted 2000-11-14 09:59 PM


oh, this hits good with this girl from the south! very good!!!
Balladeer
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5 posted 2000-11-14 09:59 PM


urinal my dreams, Corinne  
Nan
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6 posted 2000-11-15 07:38 AM


I'm soooooooo confused...

It's scary that I understand it though..

Corinne
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7 posted 2000-11-15 09:19 AM


Thanks, Passing Shadows!

Deer one, you ARE hilarious!  LOL

Nan, don't ask, jest a smmbol uf meye go ing kraaazee!

Corinne

ethome
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8 posted 2000-11-15 12:28 PM


I taut ad purst u mide a ad a code!
Casablanca Confidential
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9 posted 2000-11-15 02:40 PM


Naough thisce hear is peauxatree for shore

you know how to whistle... just pucker up and blow

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10 posted 2000-11-15 03:22 PM


Sittin inn thet whet send gaav a gud fink! *G* Well done!

Corinne
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11 posted 2000-11-15 10:10 PM


Thaaaanxxxx, evreewon 4 ur graat kommentz!

Coreen

Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-11-15 10:50 PM


Of course I  had to take this a different way - (not to say I didn't appreciate it for it's unvarnished beauty)  God help me I could only think of beautiful poems I've read here in PIP - wherein the poet's labor was clear and see it marred by a 'wear' where a 'were' should be or some other; and want to cry for the sad damage such a trivial error can cause.
Corinne - you can do more than you intend with your fabulous imagination

Corinne
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13 posted 2000-11-16 09:54 AM


Bill, you got it, baby!

Corinne

vlraynes
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14 posted 2000-11-16 10:39 PM



Corrine-
   lol..this is too cute!  
   thanks for the smile.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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15 posted 2000-11-16 11:14 PM


corinne..this is so cute    it took me a minute to get the flow of reading down..lol  but once i got it, it flowed jes lik de oshen  

very cute..

hugs, dg


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

Corinne
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16 posted 2000-11-17 08:28 PM


Taaannx soooo mush!

Coreeen

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