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Stufff Eye Maad Upp |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Wonc eye seen a son sett Uppon thuh oshun bloo Sittin inn sum whet send Dreemin uf u, Thuh ski wuz fulla clowds Urang an peenk Fur wonc eye tuuk tym Tu jesst sitt an fink Uf ur swaweet kiises Ur speshal tu mee Tho ur faar awy noow Ohnlee u eye c. Thuh moooooon es rysin Hi abuv thuh errth soh rond Ur trulee thuh ohnlee Luvv eye evverr fond. Coreeen Baeeelee |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ If this wasn't so gosh-darned adorable, I'd send you back to bed to finish your sleep ! LOL !  Have a great day - when you wake up !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
inlease leesons cooming lonng fyne. nice too c U in luvv.  Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Marge! Just phonetically spellin, ya know? Tancu, Parrrrk! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh, this hits good with this girl from the south! very good!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
urinal my dreams, Corinne  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm soooooooo confused... It's scary that I understand it though..  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Passing Shadows! Deer one, you ARE hilarious! LOL Nan, don't ask, jest a smmbol uf meye go ing kraaazee! Corinne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I taut ad purst u mide a ad a code! |
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Casablanca Confidential Junior Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 13Virgin Islands |
Naough thisce hear is peauxatree for shore you know how to whistle... just pucker up and blow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sittin inn thet whet send gaav a gud fink! *G* Well done! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thaaaanxxxx, evreewon 4 ur graat kommentz! Coreen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Of course I had to take this a different way - (not to say I didn't appreciate it for it's unvarnished beauty) God help me I could only think of beautiful poems I've read here in PIP - wherein the poet's labor was clear and see it marred by a 'wear' where a 'were' should be or some other; and want to cry for the sad damage such a trivial error can cause. Corinne - you can do more than you intend with your fabulous imagination |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Bill, you got it, baby! Corinne |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Corrine- lol..this is too cute! thanks for the smile. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
corinne..this is so cute it took me a minute to get the flow of reading down..lol but once i got it, it flowed jes lik de oshen very cute.. hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Taaannx soooo mush! Coreeen |
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