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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-10-24 06:19 PM





gossip flies
mixed truth with lies
painful words
in thin disguise

sling a name
like it's a game
lives will never
be the same

telling stories
my, what fun
quickly too much
damage done

rumors start-
a lethal dart
pay no mind
this wounded heart


-vlraynes




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-24 06:49 PM


this is so very sad.....
I wish people weren't so cruel
Excellent write
-SEA

Daniel J D
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2 posted 2000-10-24 07:06 PM


vlraynes,
How very true. So many people do not ever understand the consequences of their actions. Very well thought of write.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

vlraynes
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3 posted 2000-10-24 09:08 PM



SEA-
   too often, people just don't stop
   and think about the damage their
   words can do to another person.
   thank you so much for your
   thoughtful reply.
   glad you like.  

Daniel-
   right you are...it's unfortunate how
   often pain is caused with just a few
   words spoken thoughtlessly.
   thanks so much for your reply.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2000-10-25 12:02 PM


Vicky, as I'm sure you know, there's a lot of truth here.  Gossip hurts, often more than the people who spread it realize.  Thanks for the reminder to all of us.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-10-25 12:05 PM


sticks and stones may break my bones..but names will never hurt me? Whoever came up with that did not have emotions. you hit it on the head. What damage can falsehoods create? plenty and some can never be mended with a "sorry." Ron
Parker
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6 posted 2000-10-25 12:06 PM


Vicky, very pointed piece. Even in our peaceful little family, evil rumors can start. I would hope that everybody's good intentions don't get the better of them if all they did was heard it from a friend who heard it from another friend....

Some little innocent flirting by me, spread with a little extra flare by so and so could make me look like the evil lady killer....

Of course its all true, about me...lol. or so I've heard.

Parker

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
7 posted 2000-10-25 12:14 PM


Words, as we all know, are very powerful....this is an excellent write and a good reminder of a lesson we should all take to heart.

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Butterflies_dont_cry
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Posts 3733
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8 posted 2000-10-25 12:35 PM


A very good point indeed Vicky...if I'd done
half the things I've heard I'd be to busy to
even be here! It's a shame that those that
feel guilty themselves find talking about
others an ego boost...and sometimes it's
innocent mis-information...either way it can
run like wild fire....You've posted a good
reminder to think before you speak~


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-10-25 06:48 AM


Vicky~
Oh, I think you know my feelings on this one !

Small minds create big rumors
to make it appear they know something.

I refer to them as delusional dildoes-
cause nobody else will play with them
they can only play with themselves.

And THAT'S my feeling on that !

I go my merry way
I care not what they say
Gossipers stir the pot of black,
with intelligence that they lack !

Great write girl !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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10 posted 2000-10-25 07:48 AM


I flirt, I hug, I kiss, I have fun
The ones who KNOW me know of my heart
I will not now nor will I ever run
If they don't like it then THEY may part



vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-10-25 09:22 PM



Marilyn-
   Yes...way too much truth here.
   Gossip is a very dangerous thing.
   Thanks for reading...glad you like.  

Ron-
   you are so right...names/words can
   and do hurt very deeply.
   thanks so much for your kind reply.
   glad you like this.  

Parker-
   so true...it is a shame that even here,
   where things are usually peaceful,    
   things such as this can and do happen.
   thanks so much for the thoughtful
   response.  glad you enjoyed.  

   btw...you wouldn't believe the things  
   i've heard about you...lol.  

Peppermint35-
   thank you so much for the kind response.
   glad you like this.  

Holly-
   i am so glad you like this.  
   how right you are...too many people
   try to make themselves look better
   by making others look worse...it
   really is sad.  thank you so much
   for reading and responding...it
   really means alot to me.  

Marge-
   Oh, my friend...leave it to you to
   put a smile on my face with this one.  
   'delusional dildoes'... I LOVE THAT!!  
   ...and how true it is.  
   thank you so much for the smile and
   the giggle...and thank you for being
   such a wonderful friend.    ((((HUGS))))

Mark-
   my sweet friend...NO...you should not
   have to run anywhere.  only you, and a
   few fortunate others know what is truely
   in your heart...nobody else can assume
   to know, and has no business passing
   judgement on your actions.  you MUST
   stay right here my friend.    
   thanks for reading...glad you like it.  

thanks again all,
   -vicky



  




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
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12 posted 2000-10-25 09:37 PM


Vicki, Great message in a heartfelt style. If only, (we) not look so hard for other's faults, maybe.. interact with mutual respect, what a nice experience could be shared by all. sorry..   Marcy
vlraynes
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13 posted 2000-10-26 12:41 PM



Marcy-
   thank you so much for the kind response.
   it really means alot to me.    you've
   hit the nail on the head...mutual respect
   is all it takes.  

   hugs,
    -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



serenity blaze
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14 posted 2000-10-26 01:38 PM


Oh my!!!  I forgot what I was going to say!  (Blame it on Marge, rofl...)  But yes, gossip...hmmm..I just handle it this way, if ya wanna know something, ask me!!! I have neighbors across the street who spent a good deal of time peering at us through their curtains...So...I took ours down!!!  Live, and let live...shrug.  with winks and thanks.
vlraynes
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15 posted 2000-10-26 09:21 PM



Serenity-
   lol...ok, we'll blame it on Marge...
   she cracks me up.  
   lol @ you too...taking your curtains
   down...i love that!!  
   thanks for the smile and the laugh.
   glad you enjoyed.  

   hugs,
   -vicky



  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
16 posted 2000-11-14 04:19 PM


tricks..words can often hurt--more than stones thrown..  and its the little things that tend to hurt the most..
we likely know the truths in our hearts..and when we dont, openness and honesty will find them out for us in the best way possible    
always keep an open heart  

hugs, dg


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

vlraynes
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17 posted 2000-11-16 08:53 PM



dg-
  thank you, old friend.  
  i KNOW you understand just where
  this one came from...and yes...
  keeping an open heart is very
  important.  
  thanks for the encouraging words.

  love and hugs,
  -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



ethome
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18 posted 2000-11-16 08:59 PM


The title gives very good advice and the rest of the piece is very well delivered clear and concise with the craft of poetic language sending the points home....ethome
vlraynes
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19 posted 2000-11-17 08:36 PM



ethome-
   thanks so much.  
   glad you enjoyed this one.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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