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Passions Gallery--serenity (the Power)
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Passions Gallery--serenity (the Power) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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in her hands, the power of life in her words, the power of light in her heart, the power of fate by the light of the moon she calls forth the power of the light filling her very being she shines and we see her as she is a being of life a sister of the light inspiring others opening her heart she speaks the words: "power of life and of the light grant to me, thy servant, this night the gift of thy second sight which is mine by goddess' right" in her eyes, the story of life in her mouth, the song of life in her soul. . . . . . life. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Hey! I was going to say that! *grins* Luvdit as usual. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Boy, you pegged her, Sven!! Power and life...that's our girl. Very excellent job here  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sven--she is what you say...very special! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~ABSOLUTELY!!! *This is just soOo cool Sven! *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oohhhhh this one is sooooo cooool yes...thats me twin girlie girl.. me little candle dancer .... you have captured her PERFECTLY Sven ... and let me say ALL of your Gallery poems have been cool to read...I have been impressed just how well you have captured so many diverse personalities so well and done it in many different formats and styles well done jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree...the lady (and she is one!) is truly represented by this poem. She is a wonder!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, a wonderful poem for the eighth wonder of the world. Well caught in poetry. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven such words of grace, you have penned something so beautiful here which is fitting for our graceful serenity..another fine piece to add to your gallery...well done Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ And Serenity glows ... because she knows she lights the candle that others need so She gives up the night in endless flight of thoughts to dance upon our souls knowing - knowing *Your gallery is a wonder to behold, sir. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can see her that way. loved to read this one too. Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to put that crystal ball away...you're really looking into everyone's soul way too well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- excellent...this is one of my favorites of the Passions Gallery that you have created thus far. You captured her quite well...amazing, you are. take care. ~amy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
MI, sorry to steal your words. . . LOL. . thank you. . . Balladeer, thank you sir. . . glad that I was able to do her justice. . . Martie, she is indeed quite special. . . thank you SpitFire, thanks. . . peace to you my friend. . . Jan, thank you. . . it's been a challenge, but I've been enjoying every minute of it. . . thank you for reading. . . there will be more. . . deVine, she is all that and more. . . thank you. . . Kethry, don't say that too loud, she might think that we actually like her!  Thank you my friend. . . tracie, thank you Graceful is indeed another word I would use for her. . . Marge, thank you ma'am. . . she does know doesn't she? Charisma, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, no crystal ball. . . it's all right there in her words. . . thank you. . . Amy, glad that you like this one. . . and it's good to know that I've captured the best of her. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a tribute is deserved to this hewre girl yuh yuh. good pick |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just don't know what to say...Sveetie, you got me weeping over here...how I wish I could really hug all you good people...geez, I feel like I just won an academy award...somebody better help me off of this stage, I can't see too good right now. LOVE YOU ALL!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven if we could find someone to look into a poets heart and soul and then create beautiful words describing what he could so clearly see I would want to share that beauty with him...we have, his name is Sven, and he has looked into many hearts to share what he see's, and I thank you Sven for that...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Walt, thanks! I can almost pick them as good as you! James, my friend, thank you so much. . . your words are greatly appreciated. . . and thank you for reading. . . serenity, just continue to be you. . . that's all that we ask. . . and, my friend, it is we that have won. . . for having you in our lives. . . we are the better for it. . . now, someone get this woman some tissue!  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, A wonderful piece for a wonderful person. Well done. You have painted her beautifully. LW< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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