Open Poetry #10 |
Watch The Night |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Watch the night … in the fall of darkness you will see them… the consonant notes from the symphony of my heart as they are seized and placed as stars to lend light to the evening sky Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Looking to the night sky with wide eyes and both ears to the wind. Wow, love the style, the flow, and the content. Lovely verse and leaves much hope for this cowboy to catch a glimpse. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Caress, Like the way it flows from heart to sky, feelings through descending darkness to be spotted by the eye, twinkling above with much love. This poem is another lovely write and vision. take care -Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Ed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whisper - You have lit my evening sky. Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A stunning star studded poem...the format surely added to the gentle flowing effect that the poem had...perfectly done~ |
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