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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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You Must Have You must have heard my heart sighing for you As I lay wrapped in the velvet star spangled night You must have met my soul as she sought for you As she roamed looking for loves everlasting light Wandering in wishes dreams seking love so true You must have known I needed you to hold me As I reached for your comfort through my tears You must have shown my soul where she could, must be As she struggled against those lonely sad years Searching endlessly for her one true place to be You must have seen my spirit weeping with pain As I hungered for your heavenly and blessed touch You must have heard it call you over and over again As she trembled, shaking, needing you so very much Wondering if she was going mad or even insane You must have touched my heart just one time As I spoke your name whispered it into the still air You must have felt its heat and understood its sign As it beat against my breast hoping that you'd care Knowing that only you would make my soul shine Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marsha this is smooth and warm, yet it's crying at the same time... you must have been daydreaming heavy and getting good vibes about this person finally coming around to make you happy......very nice work by the way Iloved the question statements, they're reader friendly...ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, I'm feeling a little blue today, missing my man if the truth be known. So I think that's why this is a little less than effervescant. I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad the warmth came through it too. Thank you for reading it. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Marsha, Hugs to you.....you have truly outdone yourself. Each poem gets better and better from you....I am SO the President of Majestic Mushy Marsha Offical Fan Club!! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds as if you need to grab ahold of that man of yours and not let go for awhile. You say that you are missing him and I hope that he is not too far away so that you can do just that. Either way, I am sure that he is missing you as much or more knowing your heart from your poetry. Lovely but heartfelt sadness in this one my president. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, you are so sweet, truly you are. It's not that I fault your judgement, I don't. It's just that I find it really hard to see merit in something I've written. So I thank you, I truly do. Now all you have to do is come up with a cute name, something like MAP, No I'm not going to tell you, you'll work it out. I know. ! Mushy Mark my friend, when I get the chance to grab ahold of him I will, I assure you. It's just one of those times you know, still it's only a temporary thing, thank goodness. And I'm sure he misses me as much as I do him. I do thank you for saying such nice things about me. And I thank you for taking the time to stop by, I know you don't have much time at the moment so a visit from you is doubly, ten times as much appreciated. And I always appreciate my friends dropping by anyway. Take care Mushy Marsha < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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