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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I want to fall up come with me, let’s fall up and not into something deep I think it’s time to do it different before we go to sleep for if we fall up, and play in clouds what a treat we’d find all our problems now ant-size all bad habits left behind fall up with me, not in love with me you don’t even have to be in like with me but if you come fall up with me wouldn’t that be heavenly? Come let’s talk to angels, and help them in the choir now I don’t have much of a voice but if you sing bass, I’ll sing higher… and let’s make faces out of clouds of animals or some such things and while we play our game just right let’s whip up some sun-rings since we’re here, let’s grab God’s ear and tell him how pleased we are for this imagination he’s given us c’mon with me, let’s fall up this far! What is this? You don’t want to play and fall up with me to far away? and you’d toss my dreams to reality? for the truth you’d rather see? But can’t you see? There, in the skies where up and up is in the blue? why don’t you try just once with me and let me fall up with you. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine, you always brighten my day. And today, you warm my soul. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, falling up, what an amazing concept. And heavenly in its presentation. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Please come with me and we'll fall up We'll reach the stars and never stop And, as our upward spiral goes, We will not stop till Heaven knows. Our spirits on our upward rise Will leave behind the earth and skies. Ascension for eternity As we fall up - just you and me. An amazing theme by an equally amazing writer,,,,,thank you , Karilea  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
reminded me of a poem by shel silverstein called fallin up o yuh i likes the way you went with it yuh yuh |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I am in like with you...and I do want to fall up...what a wonderful idea, but I'm a girl...is that okay? Smiles here. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, This is a beautiful and original concept, I just love this idea of falling up. Wonderful, to go scampering through the clouds, and riding rainbows. Love this one and you know I do. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Karilea! You've definitely put my thoughts in a higher realm! Thanks! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Falling UP is most definately the only way to fall...this is excellent! I loved the display of imagination and heart in this...very Sunshine...very |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey! That's great! Unique, creative, and poetic too. What a combination. ***applause *** sunshine...I'll "Fall Up" with you, anytime (and probably like you too. jwesley |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Above the Clouds... Where the sun is always shining... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops, look what happened...this fell up! Thank you everyone, for reading...I have a very giggly muse this week...she's really tweaking my mental images... have fun! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sunshine, Oh I like this! Such nice warming fun thoughts on this dreary rainy morning I have deal with outside. Thank you for adding a little sunshine through the clouds today. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine I always knew that at some point you would try to defy gravity and head for the heavens....please inform everyone else not to try this at home...I think you're the only one that can pull it off...and you don't even have to be in like with me to know that..I loved this one!! such imagination you draw up after a holiday....take care...ethome |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wonderful, so uplifting and original! I don't know why we are afraid to just let go of gravity. Corinne |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yes Sunshine,...that WOULD be Heavenly,...as is this poem of yours. Enjoyed mucho mam! Thank you. *Peace. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sunshine, what an original concept, and delightfully written. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOLOLOL...{~,^}...isn't this such a fun way to play through the day...oops, up... [thank you my friends...] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you never cease to amaze me - (jumping into my balloon~G~) |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Second to falling in is falling up. Lovely!!! |
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