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How I hunger ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How I hunger to look deep into your eyes (Your love nourishes me; addicting nector) I feel my lost heart soaring into the skies; To feel my heart’s rhythm, yes, even the skips, (Your love clothes me, protects me in every way) while I savor the sweet softness of your lips; To hold you gently in my arms as we kiss, (Your love caresses me like a fine spring mist) we give ourselves completely to that sweet bliss; To share a love so overwhelmingly true, (Your love is my Gibraltar giving me strength) and to share that pure love with no one but you; To hear you whisper those words of love to me, (Your love is the soft whisper that stirs my soul) knowing that you and I shall always be WE. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ making me swoon today  I loved this  -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Interloper, To hear you whisper those words of love to me, (Your love is the soft whisper that stirs my soul) knowing that you and I shall always be WE. Such sweet sentiments, nicely written. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper...you are interloping into many hearts today... quite smoothly I might add... I enjoyed each and every line of this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA - You make me feel soooooo good. You have read all my schtuff ... need any TUMS yet (  ) Thank you sweet lady.Dee - The first time I've heard from you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Poeminister - Your comments are not lightly taken. Thank you. Sunshine - Your brilliance lights up my poor attempts at verse. Heartfelt thanks. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Stunning, perfectly romantic. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whisper - That "soft, sweet sigh" just melted me. Phew! catalinamoon - What a beautiful image your name brings to mind. Thanks for the "stunning" and I will continue to strive for perfection. One of the nicest comments I've ever had. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I like this piece. Very tenderly done. And I quite agree with some others - It has *swoonability* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ "Swoonability" ... now there's a fine compliment. And from such a talented person. Thank you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
A great piece, classicly written, with precise attention to meter and rhyme and an endearing message of the passions of love. Enjoyed it lots !With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great resounding metaphors tied immediately into a summation of the meaning of each one.. I wonder if Marge knows whether that is a real word swoonability....this is a very good poem!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'To share a love so overwhelmingly true, (Your love is my Gibraltar giving me strength) and to share that pure love with no one but you' Wow. Beautiful work, Interloper! Got me all caught up in it now!! Love it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dragonpoe ~ Shux. Now you are getting me just as red as Sunshine does. ethome ~ Wow! Many heartfelt thanks. I'm flabbergasted. snowpants ~ Thank you, thank you, thank you. You might like to know that the part in parentheses are thoughts that have not been, but should be, spoken. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper--this is very beautifully done..and ethome..I'm sure that swoonability is a word...at least now it is....so is swoonable. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this was so romantic......really swoonable.. love it. Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoosh! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I thougth I would bring back up the favorite I had read before, to inspire to get that pen of yours writing more than a senryu  This was incredible romantic, and you sir, are the master in the department! I would like to see you and Enchantress write together or Greeneyes maybe? |
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