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Pentaflexing Gumby...........................................
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Pentaflexing Gumby I know someone, she cringes all the time because I cannot always write in iambic pentameter rhyme ‘cause I’m me, you know through my words, this me really shows but something had a real hold over me something left from a beaming moon ‘cause now I’m more like Gumby five sides to me bending way too easily so this little ditty will really have no purpose except to say that I’d be a porpoise if I had a chance to swim at sea straight and true float like you in words like yours but if you have gotten here, this far you know that it’s more than nuts in a jar these feelings that we have to express in any form with any norm more or less and I really have no rhyme nor reason except perhaps iambic treason to share these words with you today pentaflexing Gumby just one more day because just you will understand Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, This is fantastic, I love this one, one of your poetic masterpieces. Really great write. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
C'mon Marsha....this is so bad, but I could not get "pentaflexing Gumby" out of my head...LOL... I think I've wasted a whole chance to post! but it still makes me giggle... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it was worth it sunshine just for the iambic reason bit o yuh that rocked hehehehhehehe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walt, I'm seeing more and more of you...could this be a "bad" thing? Oh No!...."I'm walting...." Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Does this mean that I have to read this 5 times to understand it?  You know I like this one. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, loved the iambic treason, and the Gumby write. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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