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The Record Scratches. Turn Back Time.
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The Record Scratches. Turn Back Time. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Sweetness… I hope you feel the same Because Sweetness… I hope to win your name At the dance when we first kissed That’s the time I reminisce It was pure poetry… It was sheer divine Like the times When you are there And I am here But we are two In this poet’s heart of mine… I can’t say its magic though I sure like to think it’s so There’s a place to hold me dear I’d just like a souvenir That simply tells me you were here When we must be apart… Life is all imaginings Butterfly strokes Of bigger things So please sweetness Sweet ease the butterflies In my heart… The tune they played was Three-part Harmony Your eyes, your lips, Your glowing face But the dance we danced Was more to me I’m pleased to know I can’t erase There the lovely daffodils Line the dance hall windowsills But the flower of my heart is you Sweetness say your dreams come true Dance with me into the night Where the stars are shining bright The dance floor has melted into bliss So hurry one last chance to kiss One last chance to feel the rhyme The record scratches, turn back time [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
AAhhhh that was wonderful Walt..loved the ending too..i can see that old 45 record spinning ha..or was it a 78  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks victoria it's music music music |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Walt~ I just love it when you write like this.........  this is so beautiful! -SEA |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
He doesn't dance folks... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this, Walt. I am pleased to see SOME men have a functioning memory.. Sandra |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
This is grand...reminiscent of the old romantic standards, sweetly sentimental and just the least bit wistful. ("Sweetness"...I've always loved that endearment) Lovely, Walt. Rainydays (back on my other machine) [This message has been edited by Rainydays (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky sea e catalina and rainy i had fub writing this ole ditty |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hmmmmmmmm I think you have been holding out on us Mr. Romance!!! This is beautiful!! I knew it was in there under all that sugar!!! Great writing w.o.w. you can weave a love poem YUH!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Walt...what a sweet reminise...I love it |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx butterflies and paula yuh yuh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
My mate Walt you are one talented guy Fabulous read my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You trip the light fantastic with this lovely. *elisaseyes~ Oh ... but he sure can dance across your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You romantic thang you!! yuh indeed you are I liked Walty Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
DA thankies yuh o i'm at college and i aint gettin kicked offline such a wunnerful feelin Marge, she's just sour that the only time i danced with her i was well past the two drink limit tracie matey yuh yuh yuh thankies preciate it |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am not even going to < !signature-->read the replies until I've let you know that this is so tenderly sweet, so winsome and charming... and all I can utter is a soft wow and a small thank you... I love it...  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx sunshine you have helped make my day yuh |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Would you believe that I actually found this on page two????.... Hm..  |
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