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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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It feels like an eternity Since I have felt the touch Of your warm gentle hands Comforting me in the velvet night It feels like a lifetime Since I’ve felt your breath As your soft whisper Tells me sweetly of your love It feels like a century Since I’ve felt your arms Holding me close to you Feeling the warmth of your heart It feels like the hands of time Has passed us both by To rekindle the flame of love That used to burn stronng in our hearts. It feels like an eternity To live here without you Standing by next to me Abandoned by your promised love. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The longing and the pain come through strongly; such a poignantly beautiful and stirring write!!! Time surely seems to drag on endlessly when in the midst of heartbreak. Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I could feel the yearning in your words and I enjoyed the way you set up the verses ...very good!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
peppermint - Thank you!  Even though I have been there.. I'm glad to say that I'm not there now. Ethome - I'm happy you liked it Now if I could only find a fitting title...lol. Thanks for stopping in. |
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