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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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~~ MIRAGE ~~ < !signature-->Miltonic Sonnet Mystic sands, dance in the midnight breeze sensuous thoughts, flow like a waterfall haunting echoes, of a coyotes call wishing on a star, thoughts begin to tease moonlight and whispers, begin to appease your voice in the wind, leaves me enthrall whispers of the desert, my heart is in awe song of the ravens and whip-poor-wils please beneath an umbrella of diamonds reflection of you haunts the tawny sands the mirage of you, stalks the desert sun love in the morning, holding my hand although the prickly pear castus i shun our love blooms, in this Apache plume land A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
WOW...I like much! Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Victoria! Denise |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, Very well done, keep up the great writing. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Victoria... This is absolutely beautiful! And it reminds me of the warmth of the Southwestern desert, which I do appreciate right now!!  Follow your dream! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a beautiful poem Victoria.... wonderful images made with great adjectives painting the lines with beauty.....ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Robert b...thank you for taking time to read..glad you liked..  Denise..So glad you enjoyed Denise..thanks for reading.. J D ..this was a hard one for me..and actually i wrote it a while back..but have edited quite a few times..thank you J D Sunny.thank you so much Sunny..and for peeking in appreciate your kind comments as always. ethome..thank you ethome..always nice to hear from you. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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