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Not Without You
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Not Without You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Won't you give me Just a minute, love? Please hear me When I ask: Won't you be mine? Like the song belongs To the bird, And the snow To the winter, Won't you give Your heart to me? I'm telling you now, I need you to listen: I've been A rainbow without color, A flower without beauty. Since the day You walked away, Life has been The summer heat Without the relief Of Autumn; The chill of winter Without the hope Of Spring. My dear, Life is only existence Without you. I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris- wowza! this is so beautiful hon. full of such longing and hope for love. i think your new beginning is on the horizon sweets. take care. ~amy~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love those lines "a rainbow without color a flower without beauty." written like a true poet with a gift...good work! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Amy: thank you, my dear friend, for your kind reply. I certainly hope you are right!  ethome: thank you for your wonderful compliment! It is encouraging to hear those words!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Snowpants, This is very well written and very moving. You try so hard. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
snowpants, I have to agree with ethome.. I LOVEEEE those lines  Beautiful. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
So powerful and so moving; like a sad and yet hopeful song... may it be and may it be soon Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Daniel: thank you, my friend! I'm glad you could stop by! rp25: well, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! pepper: thank you, my friend! You are sweet. And, I hope so, too! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so beautiful and full of desire and longing. I hope you can find this happiness. Sandra |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Sandra, for your kind words! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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