Wrapped In Orange, She'll Fly......

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SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-11-12 12:23 PM

~I made a decision to stop doing something today and that decision,...was a good one.~

Wrapped In Orange, She'll Fly......

She's out there again,
in circles, walking,
wrapped orange, around her smile
hands scattering the hours
in fields turning winter,
hardening soil,
yet pourous enough to
swallow her release.

Occassionally, the breath
of her decision billows white,
through wool blend warmth,
into air, crisp with her scenery,
alive, it's brand new today,
and she's out there,
in circles, walking.

Seeing a way out of viciousness
surrounding, and smiling,
for the seasons have accepted
her stretching to explain,
what today's walk entails.

A visit with visions,
of afternoon tea parties,
free from the strangle of it,
and a facing to the reality
that will never slide,
but letting go of what controls,
more than she realizes,
will regain the life she hides,
from you, from herself,
and wrapped in orange,...
she'll fly.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-12 12:54 PM

Spitfire, if I read between the lines and dissect all of the words, and if it is what I think it is, then YES, you've made such a good decision...

and I applaud you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-11-12 01:08 PM

I can't pretend to know exactly of what your decision was but in reading this many times I feel that I have a good idea and I say that to me it sounds as if you made a proper and very necessary decision. Wonderful write and worthy of more reading on my part.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-11-12 02:31 PM

Wow, this is inspiring. So, I want details of this decision.
Stay strong..
Sandra

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-11-12 06:40 PM

~Sunshine, Thank you for taking the time to dissect and try and understand what is going on. You're a sweetie for stopping in, and for the encouragement.
~Mark, thank you kindly,...wholly,...for the reply to my words. Yes,...proper and neccessary. Thank you.
~Sandra, Hi hun, thanks for coming in, and for the inspiring,...I'll e ya.
*Peace.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-11-12 07:06 PM

SpitFire,

Hey you!! I think you have made the right decision here my friend. You will see. Glad things are looking up for you. Talk soon. **HUGS**

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

6 posted 2000-11-12 07:10 PM

I see the use of Orange to symbolize freedom.
A soul freed from something, an inner evil of some sort. Nicely written

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