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Take Me Back....... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Take Me Back the hills are calling me the piper's trill stretches the sea the birds are there, singing for me "hie again…, come home…, Karilea" and it is to a time remote I flow to a distance of forever so long ago where my love still awaits, 'tis so calling soft my name in twilight's glow this plea, from some origin in me deep allows me daydream, but to gather no sleep lifts me high to fly among moon's beam to search the sound of my lover's dream and in this wealth of my mind's eye descry emerald meadows under turquoise sky hear the call of the grassland's birds long ago this land of fantasy is heard it wants to come, and take me back to that time when our love was fresh and you stood tall in the twilight's gleam the sight of which caught my breath this strain, this pull, this tug at my heart this love, your love, did not depart 'tho centuries now separate the you from me I still hear, soft, your call, "Karilea…" come my love, come cross the seas come and take me back with thee… < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Completely beautiful!!! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, that's the way I like to begin Sundays....read a poem and melt in the beauty and flavor of it. I love it! all I can say is.... karilea karilea  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is beauty, such a world I could see this plainly. Utterly beautiful, I love this one Kari, I do. Take care Majestic Mushy M  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow loved this Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dreamkeeper, my complete thanks... 'Deer...you say that so well, thank you... Marsha, so glad you enjoyed this visit, thank you... Maria, thanks for coming in... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Talk about getting lost and transported in a poem of time. WOW....really got taken by this beautiful piece. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Karilea - Karilea ~ If I whisper, will you listen?...' Such a lovely piece to grace the page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, welcome home...and thank you... Marge, of course I would...but you knew that... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear the pipes now Karilea. . . And the soft sounds of the Celtic soprano wafting o'er the moor. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it something, Sven, when the music can transport one to the Isles...there must be some emerald in my bones...for I am there, in the Celtic mist, casting my glance o'er the moors for my love...if only in midnight dreams... HEY, I'm going to borrow those lines!... thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Please do my friend. . . and take us back once again. . . (and. . . you're welcome. . . ) ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL, Sven, I sort of did... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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