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Passions Gallery--Tara Simms (browneyes senryu)
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Passions Gallery--Tara Simms (browneyes senryu) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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browneyes tender heart seeking a love for all life a passionate life browneyes open arms yearning to be loved by one a warm tender love browneyes quiet sigh heart holding gentle caress passionate poet ----------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Another beautiful portrait painted with all your mastery of words  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Simply said for a lovely poet. Your words do her justice - she's a tender-hearted beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How lovely! If I were her ,my heart would be skipping a beat just at the anticipation of love you pose in these few lines Very well done. Your verses reflect her tender spirit Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Fine piece my friend for one of our finest poets great jobLove Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A haiku for Tara...to be treasured! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoy her writing..lovely words sven.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
pepper, thank you my friend. . . Marge, that she is. . . thank you so much. . . Liz, your words have made me smile. . . and her spirit is tender. . . tracie, thank you. . . she is an excellent poet. . . Sunshine. . . thank you. . . Victoria, I have always enjoyed her work. . .thank you for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I find myself eager to read the work of this woman. A beautiful portrait. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Wonderful work my friend. I don't really know Tara, but I feel you have given me a glimpse. Thank you. I like the senryu. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I can't believe I nearly missed this one. BTTT. It's lovely as always and spot on? what else. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Another lovely piece my friend. I'm sure she'll love it. Juls |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, I have to agree completely. Great poem, Sven, and for a wonderful poet. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dreamkeeper, I urge you to do so. . . she is excellent. . . LW, sometimes, that glimpse is all we need. . . thank you. . . Kethry, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Juls, I hope that she does. . . Sandra, thank you my friend. . . she is a wonderful person and poet. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Sven, Wonderfully done! In just a few short verses, you have perfectly captured both the inner and outer beauty of Tara Simms. She is a very talented poet and deserves the praise. - Jeff |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Sven, I was delighted to find that you'd written a poem for me! I still have the one you wrote several months back as a challenge (I treasure that one, you described me so well). This is beautiful, my friend. Thank you. Dreamkeeper, I'm always eager for new fans. Thank you all for the lovely words. I'm honored to be viewed in the manner you describe me. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Jeff, thank you. . . coming from you, that is a compliment. . . and she is quite deserving. . . thanks Tara, I'm touched that you still have the one that I wrote for you before. . .you've been a good friend to me over the months, and I've been honored to be your friend. . . so glad that you like this. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely, Sven what a way to pay tribute to a person ypu should really grace us with your haiku/senryu more often |
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