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I'll Remember This
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I'll Remember This |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Reflecting on what's just occurred In joy I slip quietly from the bed To search my mirrored face for signs As I remember this Lips swollen, heavy from passion Cheeks flushed from generated heat Languidness throughout my limbs I sigh as I remember this All night tonight the signs were there Electric sparks that flowed and surged Looks that asked, confirmed the need Oh yes, I will remember this How sweet the touches when they came How hands lovingly sculpted bliss How well we danced that last refrain Forever, I'll remember this Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Your last stanza is positively my favorite! Beautiful flow!!!! Nice job with this! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Pepper, very nice.Great lines. I thought I was the only one writing about this tonight. Glad someone else is having a good night too. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you dreamkeeper; I liked your poem too  Ron I bet we were reading each other's poems at the very same time  laughs you know what they say about great minds!!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Beautifully done, Peppermint. The moments just after such a "special" time are just as special themselves. Lovely thoughts, tastefully written. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Peppermint-- beautiful poem. full of such beauty and love. this is very special indeed. take care. ~amy~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you rainydays for stopping by to read and for your kind words!! Thank you too Amy...something for the memory book Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Such sweet memories sigh Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper, this is beautiful, such a brilliant write, so full of the heat from the afterglow. Love this one I truly do. Great work Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PepperMint~ This is an illusion of loveliness. A special glow for remembering ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ Ahhhhhhhh.....I know this So beautiful....enjoyed this so much! -SEA |
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