Open Poetry #10 |
Wanderer |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Since you're quite the traveler, Won't you come around my way One of these days? Besides, I told them I was going out To find something. What can I say To persuade you into stopping by? Need I tell you Of the emotional highs, The excited bliss? Perhaps when you look Through a non-dreamer's eyes, You won't see the such. So call me a romanticist; I'm well aware Of my frequent fervor. It's the way of the world To conceal the frivolity within; All is much too emphasized On composure. So what if I am intoxicated With elation? Aren't the best things in life Made of enchantment and delight? So, wanderer, Won't you make a path To my door? I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This wanderer would beat a path to your door to offer you accolades. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
The wanderer knows but one path. For all paths lead to one. A journey that must be traveled alone. All signs but a blur at a snails pace. Moments weighted as steps drag Dreamily forward. Until the final fork is encountered. Leaning to either direction unsure The chosen path will converge With the one not chosen. A merger of certainty. As the wanderer knows but one path And all paths will lead to your door. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
"Aren't the best things in life Made of enchantment and delight?" Yes, and some of the very best, enchanting and delightful things include your writing Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris-- just must say i LOVE this! dontcha worry the "wanderer" will find thier way to your door...i'm sure of it wonderful poem you have penned! take care my friend. ~amy~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The wanderer would be totally lost if a visit to you were not in order. What a lovely verse from you and what wonderful feelings of the hopeless romantic trapped inside so many of us. One of your best for sure my friend of the diamond and blue pages. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kethry: thanks for stopping by! I'm glad you liked it! Ron: well, thank you, my friend, for the poetic reply. Much appreciated! pepper: awww, thank you! you are too kind! I'm glad you enjoyed! Amy: well, my friend, I hope you are right there. I'm so glad you could stop by and enjoy!! Mark: now, is that so? Anyway, thank you, my friend, for your kind words. I'm glad you like it. sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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