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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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~~~soft words~~~ what we need to hear is the soft of our conversation words sprung from yesterday's romance giving back that velvet glance and taking this, that one-more-chance because we can although we've taken a stand apart we still speak from the heart although not as lovely as once before bitter sometimes guards the door but I need to hear that conversation soft oft as once it came from your lips and spread like a silken cloth around these hips that once were more slender, true but that which still belongs to you as you say you belong to me and I wonder if I want you, see? just as you then wonder of me… so can we store the angry words let them go away, unheard? and take this hour, take it longer to see if there is still the hunger of what once was in passion's kiss to see if it is something to miss and find out if there lies aloft a message from a conversation soft… Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, softly spoken but stunning none the less. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A soft conversation is the wonder of it all and leads to all wonders. nicely done. Ron |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
The reality of this piece touched me deeply. Love over time is the most wonderful of all. Excellent writing here. Your emotions come across very well. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Soft words lead to sweetness; as sweet as what you've written here  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
such a beautiful plea, Sunshine, from a woman who cares. Nothing is sadder than when soft words turn harsh....softness is vital. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, this touched me sweetie in ways I words cannot say... Dani |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, I'm a shadows-keeper...you don't see much of me, but you hopefully feel the impact...thank you little one... Ron, you are so correct...thank you... dreamkeeper, hello again...and if you saw the emotion, then you read it well, thank you... thank you peppermint... 'Deer, vital as blood to heartstrings, yes... Dani, don't you just love being rendered speechless? That happens often in the forums...thank you for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari this is marvellous, a softly spoken plea, I really love this one. It's going in my library, a very special poem this. Wonderul work Kari, really beautiful. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Sunshine, a lovely poem! Thanks Jon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
We all need soft words in our life. . . Thanks for the reminder. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Kari...if I said beautiful, it'd not be enough. This is a soul toucher, one that nestles down deep and speaks the truths many try not to see, the inevitable, that comes as time walks by being denied by mind and eye... but truth nevertheless, as look in the mirror will tell. This is when love is tested and and should hold strong. This is also when real stupidy hits some of us and we do/say stupid things and lose in the end. That is if anything I just said makes any sense. well written my friend jwesley |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, what a special place to be...your library...thank you... Thank you Jon... Sven, I'm SUCH a nag... James, that is one of the loveliest compliments, that to touch a soul renders the best in all poets...you among them...I am finally beginning to know to take written words from my treasured chest and attempting to pour them forth...so know, Sir, that what you said is so right...as you have always been...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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