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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Her head bows timidly As a smile curls at the corner Beneath blushing cheeks A twist of silken locks loosens Dangling seductively As glimpses of sparkling eyes Are seen between bats of bashful lashes A sideways glance confirms desire Charged with passion The air grows electric between two A tender moment waits Each anxious to be taken By the love of the other Finger tips touch Softly Entwining Uniting two souls Into one moment Two hearts Into one rhythm Two gasps Into one sigh One moment Into two forevers Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my, look who is asking for the "crown" to come back... well done, Ron...very well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sigh, I was carried away with this one  Complete indeed Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
What can I say all a girl has to do is bat her eyes and well you know the rest. Enjoyed very much!! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*heartfelt sigh* Beautiful, simpily beautiful. You've captured this wonderfully. I applaud!!!! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Ron, a lovely write....went straight to my romantic heart Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
(looking around quizzically) Ron, where is your other poem?? The "symphony" one? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And in the distance the bells shall toll to sound the coming of the new age of masters and the parade shall be lead in your honor. Exquisite piece my friend. Really got into this one big time. |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
...and I too would like to honor you, among the masters, sounds like you found yourself a real catch, good for you..real sensual and thanks for sharing |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sunshine...Thanks...A crown? I am not befitting for such honors. I am pleased you stopped by. Maree..'tis you who carry us away, dark angel. with beautiful words you let us soar. inot2b...you are so wonderful with a kind word at all times, thank you for taking time to read. dreamkeeper...I'm glad you liked it. I'm looking forward to many more of your work. Pepper...It came straight out of my heart, glad you enjoyed it. Rainy...the other one was moved to adult forum...it was a bit over the guidelines for here Mark...I am always honored by your appreciated remarks, thank you friend, you've made my days here enjoyable. compassion...thank you also...you also are too kind. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ron this carried me away, I really like this one, an excellant poem. So well written. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I must apologize to all who may have been offended to another poem which was moved to adult forum, I did not mean to offend anyone and since I seemed to have caused a disturbance among the poets here I shall bow out gracefully. I am truly sorry. i recieved a few e-mails and apologize openly. it has been great while I've been here. After things cool down i may return again at some later date. until then. You have been very kind. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
you may want to carry extra shorts for the heat endurance..i can feel the sweat pop out on my face just from reading this..keep your cool hun, your gonna need it. smiles & hugs |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ron, Please reconsider and know that I had one of mine moved as well. No-one here is going to pass judgement on you, the moderators have a very tough job in calling the shots as to what should be moved and what not to be moved. Please, understand that this is not directed at you. Sometimes us poets do a very good job in creating vivid and explicit pictures and that is a credit to your talent. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ron...hey guy...no one wants you to leave...your writing is exquisite and I for one really enjoy it... just because something was moved doesnt mean we want you gone...please please stay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ron a very silky poem...I like your definition of complete...no big deal that one of your poems got moved to adult...just live and learn...most of us have come pretty close to that border...if one of your poems is questionable you can just check with a moderator first...take it easy and relax...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Ron, this is a beauty, and I did not see the other poem, or if I did, it was one of many of yours that I loved. Don't leave, I want to keep reading your poems, always. Peace Sandra |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ron,...I would be personally saddened to see you leave this place, if even only for a little while. Stick around,...your words are needed here. And this piece before us now,...just proves it. Full of emotion. *Peace your way. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Hey you are a great poet in all different types. Please don't take away from us the ones from here. Just go to adult for the more mature group. Heck I still have a problem figuring out if they are talking weather or a womans body. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Ron this is a beauty so well refined and written....really enjoyed this read....ethome |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ron* This is a beautifully written poem...please reconsider your decision to leave as we will miss your work~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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