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katgoddessofillusion
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since 2000-11-10
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0 posted 2000-11-10 05:48 PM


"A Love You Always Wanted"

There comes once in a lifetime
that you find someone
who listens, cares and
loves you regardless of
prison walls or prison talk -
someone who will stand by you.

They say a soulmate is someone
you love, someone who is your
destiny, someone who will
remain a lifetime with you.

And who else can you tell all your
heart to? This was good
when I started it, but I'm getting
freaked out along the way
so I've got to finish this tomorrow.

I can't write.

-By katgoddessofillusion, November 10, 2000

© Copyright 2000 katgoddessofillusion - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-11-10 05:54 PM


Kat,
welcome to Passions, let me congratulate you on this piece. I hope to see more of your work.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2000-11-10 07:02 PM


Kat,
Welcome to Passions, of course you can write, this was well done. Hope to read more soon.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-11-10 10:07 PM


Welcome from here, too. Keep writing, we will keep reading.
Sandra

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-11-10 10:12 PM


I'd have to say you've made a great
start...and picked a great place to do it.
Welcome to Passions...I hope you'll enjoy it
as much as we do~


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
5 posted 2000-11-10 10:12 PM


this was well done gettin lil freaky like soulmate was more like inmate i'd drop the pen and run too but yuh
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