Open Poetry #10 |
Trust Me |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"Trust Me" i now know your story and what you've been through now it's my turn to say some things to you you are not alone and never shall you be for i love you completely today and for all eternity i know the pain you've endured and see the sadness in your eyes but never will you hear from me the lonely sound of good-bye you captured my heart from the start refusing to let go so now it's my turn to make sure that you know you are my moon, my stars, my everything gave me a new life, and released my soul to love and protect you is my only goal no secret lies, no hidden agenda the words i say come straight from my heart i want to start with you a new life and for us never to part you're my blue skies on a rainy day you're the answers to my prayer and i want you to know for you, i'll always be there so please trust in me with me, you no longer will cry and i promise with all that i am i will never say good-bye Amy M. Kennedy [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, this is lovely, truly beautiful, so honest and full of your heart. (It's what true love does, I know) Love this one Amy truly love it, you have such a shining soul it's a pleasure to read your gems that you leave here. Very well presented love, a real treasure, and your inspiration will love it too I know she will. Take care Mushy Marsha < !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Just wanted to make sure this didn't disappear down the blue page too quickly. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, these are sweet promises, and you give them so well.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'you captured my heart from the start refusing to let go so now it's my turn to make sure that you know you are my moon, my stars, my everything gave me a new life, and released my soul to love and protect you is my only goal' 'you're my blue skies on a rainy day' OK, Aim. MY NEW FAVORITE. This is absolutely beautiful. I stopped quoting because everytime I read it, I found another line that I loved!! Wonderfully written, my friend!! sp < !signature--> I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
so please trust in me with me, you no longer will cry and i promise with all that i am i will never say good-bye Your Love, is very lucky to have you Amy sigh, this is beautiful! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ya got such a great big heart girl and it shows up when you write some poetry and this one's no different than the others....that big heart shows in your work and you should be proud...ethome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are precious |
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