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Temptress
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0 posted 2000-11-09 11:21 PM


Washed away,
Gone astray,
Riding into the sunset,
With no occupant aboard.
My thoughts grown,
In leaps and bounds,
Going unnoticed in the crowd.
Why do I always have to blend in?



My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-11-09 11:37 PM



Temptress-
   i noticed.  
   no fun to feel this way, i know.
   been there too many times.
   i'm sorry you're feeling overlooked,
   and hope you'll feel better and
   find your smile again soon.  

   hugs,
   -vicky





"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2000-11-09 11:54 PM


empty yur onno the best bout replyin to all and everyone we love you lots hang in there yur work is very inventive yuh
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-11-09 11:59 PM


Temptress~
Well, sometimes ya' just gotta SMILE !
That'll make 'em notice.
Or you could whisper.
Isn't it exciting to have so many pages to choose from ?
Sometimes I start at the back and work my  way forward.
It works out the same if you think about it.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-11-10 02:15 AM


I see you...truly I do...and a welcome sight you are...please feel free to smack me if ever I seem to be missing you ok?

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities


Masked Intruder
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5 posted 2000-11-10 03:20 AM


Barterring for attention, eh?  *grins*  What's in it for me, hmm?  If I goggle over your body....dangit...I mean, your work all day and all night, what do I get out of it?  Of course, I mean besides mental stimulation of the endorphin producing gland that sends out these strange chemicals each time I smile when I read your words that somehow make me a healthier person.  Oh....hmm, guess that's all I really wanted anyways.  *wink*  
Sven
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6 posted 2000-11-10 01:42 PM


Sending to page one. . .

I've always said, "If you want to be seen, you've got to make a scene!"  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-11-10 04:56 PM


BTTT,
so you can be seen again  
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Temptress
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8 posted 2000-11-10 05:24 PM


Okay...*guilty look* so I admit it..I was throwing a SLIGHT temper tantrum and whining. Apologies!   Ya know I don't vent that often!  

vlraynes:
I found the smile, thanks! It plays rather clever hide and seek sometimes.

Walt:
Thanks. I'm hangin'...dontcha worry!  

Marge:
Yes it is wonderful to have so much to choose from. I start a couple of pages back sometimes to to make sure nothing good has been overlooked. It isn't always easy, but yanno, I just had to have my wine time! Thanks!

Paula Finn:
*SMACK* LOL!Just kidding! In the words of the Donkey on that show, Winnie The Pooh (WHICH I HATE...thats the whole show I hate except for Tigger) Thaaanks for noticin'     

Masked Intruder:
Whats in it for you, eh? Geesh...E-mail me, and we'll negotiate the details!   I'm glad my poetry makes you healthy!   Enjoy! Thanks for reading and popping in!

Kethry:
Thank you very much!  



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