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Delightful Cooler Weather of Mine
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Delightful Cooler Weather of Mine |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Autumn fading, November month, As this night, The breeze is cooler. Step outside with feet in the nude, And feel the sharp grasp, Of dropping temperature, Assisted by, A romping wind. That wind has been playing all day, Stomping the treetops, And teasing wildly, With mischievious fingers, Playing like a child, In every head of hair in the county. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Temptress- oh no...this is not hitting page 2 yet!  i love the picture you've created in my mind...you've given the wind a personality all it's own. wonderful! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
lets all crowd surf tempty's pleasent poem yuh yuh |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great images, Temptress!! Love it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Hey, babe. I betcha if I stepped outside in the nude right now, I would fall over from shock. It's is frickin cold here, yo. I forgot what twenty degrees felt like. And boy it's a good thing I don't have a car since last night's wonderful car accident, cause I'd probably drive to Mexico so I could warm up. LOL |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Temptress~ What a delightful read, I just loved it  but hey thankfully our temperature is starting to rise now November's here (hooray) ~HUGS~ ~TRacie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A perfect November poem. We are all feeling the "grasp of dropping temperatures", which you describe so wonderfully Loved this Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Good morning, sunshine girl ! I hope your dropping temperatures don't come my way anytime soon. Make mine warm and toasty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Cool air does ignite the soul, making ardent cravings all the more intense...Love this piece. Robert Joseph |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ever step in the snow with no shoes on?? Brrrrrr. . . but it's strangely refreshing. . .  This reminds me of that feeling. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
vlraynes: Thank you for saving it from the void! The wind has its own personality, and I love trying to describe it. Walt: Thanks! Snowpants: I'm glad you enjoyed the images! I love creating images! Masked Intruder: HIYA SWEETIE! How is it that I always miss you these days?  I wish it was colder here. I know I'll be sorry for saying that sooner or later, but I'd like to have a cold Christmas this year instead of a mildy warm one. Geesh..You had a car accident? You just HAVE to e-mail me. PLEASE? tracie: Thank you for enjoying the poem, and November is a beautiful month. Sometimes overlooked I think. Elizabeth: Thank you. It is an honor to have you read my work as I enjoy yours very much! Marge: You always have a way of making me feel better. Thanks! Ohh..and thanks also for the e-mail! Robert: WOw! I definetely agree! Thanks for reading! Sven: I'm glad you liked it! LOL! Hmm..in the snow without shoes..Well, it wasn't deep snow, but my feet made their way to warmth pretty quick! Maybe its refreshing AFTER the sting wears off? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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