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Mahogany Swirls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Mahogany Swirls Mahogany swirls of auborn hair Flowing cascades of satin blend Dancing tangles of passion care Clinging embrace of lust crescend Mounting surge of restless release Surging flows of temptation build Lover's massage rest in velvet crease Toss of ecstasy in symphony's guild Hesitant breath filling pending gasp Clutch of nails plow fields on back Starving lips gulp in surging grasp Trace of tongue racing nectar's track Mahogany swirls sending fears aloft Slashing time in created winds so soft Rested sighs on manifest coming due Whispers softly spoken of "I love you" Mark Christopher [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ You have outdone yourself....I *SWOONED* with this one......Lovely.....you swept my heart away with this one.  -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
nicely done...very rich and warm |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW*....you have done it again.......*SIGH*....love it...I just love it.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Mark, beautifully done, just been added to my library. You da man. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--This is so rich with passion and color...I think I may swoon with Sea...I love this beautiful poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mounting surge of restless release Surging flows of temptation build Lover's massage rest in velvet crease Toss of ecstasy in symphony's guild Hesitant breath filling pending gasp Clutch of nails plow fields on back Starving lips gulp in surging grasp Trace of tongue racing nectar's track ============== OH BABY..... you've been in my raspberry tea again..havent you  steaming my screen first thing this morn... Mark this is so very lovely in its sensual, intense, passion. and as always ... your exceptional gift of imagery, color, and detail. this is exquisite ... your poetry is so uniquely you... it defines your heart and the way you love. love this one me |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
"Hesitant breath filling pending gasp Clutch of nails plow fields on back Starving lips gulp in surging grasp Trace of tongue racing nectar's track "  Yowza! This sure woke me up! Mark Christopher, this is as stimulating as it is gorgeously penned. Tender, melodious, and arousing! ~ Beth |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Boy today is a day of mental images. This is really an eye catcher. I've never heard of hair described in that way, it is beautiful! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mark-- WOWZA!! Such passion and desire mixed with that lovely heart of yours makes for a beautiful and intense combination! i do believe it is a bit early in the morning for my eyes to be reading this, but i will take sheer poetry in motion at any time. beautiful!! take care. ~amy~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you sure know how to turn a phrase....whew... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Everytime I think that I have read the most beautiful poem from your pen you weave another that breaks all the boundries...this is so exquisite...I tried to pick my favorite verse but I just can't...It would be like selecting one star out of millions as your favorite...together they belong to complete the vision. Outstanding weave my friend~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, this is full of passion, it sends a tingle, everywhere. This is seriously passionate, Oh I really really love this. What amazing images have invaded my head. I think I need a lie down. Just WOW Mushy Marsha This is hot Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh my word!! I think we should change the name of Open to Pre-Adult! Just teasing, this is very, very sensual, what else could I expect from an Irishman!!< !signature--> "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SEA-as long as it is swept this way you will know that it will be treated with much love. Thank you my sweet friend. Paula-Thank you much...glad you saw the warmth in it. Charisma-WOW....a *sigh* and a hug. Must be my lucky day.  Thank you my friend.Martie-Please do my dear....Cowboy has two arms ya know. Thank you for making cowboy smile with natural visions Ron-Thank you kind sir and to be added to your library is a great honor. JM-Thank you much my dear friend, but are you sure you liked it? You know me, if I can steam a screen then I will do so with a smile on my face. Hugs baby.Beth-Glad to wake you up that way....now does this mean that you feel like going back to bed?  Thank you for making cowboy both blush and smile with your response to this one. inot2B-Thank you so much. I take it you liked it. Amy-The morning time is one of the best times don't you think? Glad to see you liked it and sorry if I added a little heat to ya this morning.(NOT)Thank you my sweet friend. Karilea-I do try when I have a purpose behind it. Thank you much. Holly-Now my friend....do you think I would ever consider limiting you to a single star? Gawd NO way my friend. You dance on as many as you like as often as you like. Hugs to you my sweet friend and butterfly. Marsha-Thank you so much my dear friend and president. You know that I am more than just smiling to know that I invaded your head aren't you? LOL.....gotta keep the fan club proud now don't I? Don't fortget to show this one to Daphne and then whisper the following in her ear for me.(********) Kathleen-Somehow I just don't see you teasing at all.LOL....thank you so much and yes, if anyone would know the heart of an Irishman, then I would imagine you would. I am glad to have stirred a little fire back to you after reading your post. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Mark, a very alluring title bade me read further. As I did, I found tenderness, playfulness and passion in this lovely poem. Any woman would certainly be honored to be the subject of such esteemed and sensual attention as the poem explores both the emotional and physical nuances of loving. Wonderfully written. Rainydays |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...Mark... If you weren't my brother, I would come right out and tell you what kind of effect this had!! This is really, really sensual, and soft.......as satin.......  Follow your dream! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mark I hope you're alright...those clutching nails well I know what they can do if they get carried away.....surging gasp...whew!! this is beautifully penned with excellent metaphors...love how it rose to a cresendo and released into a soft retire....ethome... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- wow..this is incredible. you never cease to amaze me with the depths of your cowboy passion. beautiful words from a beautful heart. i love it much. love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hesitant breath filling pending gasp Clutch of nails plow fields on back Starving lips gulp in surging grasp Trace of tongue racing nectar's track Mmmmmmm...i think i like it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ I must say this is exquisite writing. Deb |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Mahogany swirls sending fears aloft Slashing time in created winds so soft Rested sighs on manifest coming due Whispers softly spoken of "I love you"' Well, Mark, you've done it again. I've been saying that a lot lately, haven't I? Anyway, my friend, very sensual, romantic write. Love it!!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mark, Lots of passion and embrace here. You are simply amazing, great work. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how does one pick a favorite of yours? a keeper among all....outstanding, and so beautiful.....*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Oh, sweet man ! I think I likes that thar manifest thing, cowboy ! 'Rested sighs on manifest coming due Whispers softly spoken of "I love you"' You're amazing ! Yep ! If poetry was measured in *swoons* ... you've got a trophy coming ! ! Love ya', Sexy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BUMP !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As promised. I do keep my word. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just came by for another taste of this sweet treat .. think of it as "just desserts" winkiewinkie baby (hehe) goes down SMOOOOOOTH with raspberry tea  me |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The word "Beautiful" would not even begin to compliment this exsquite piece of writing. Mark, you break all boundaries with your talent, my friend. I am, as always, in awe of you... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mmm...WOW! .... .... .... ...wow.... i'm left rather speechless other than that... this is awesome!hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mark Your poem is as beautiful as what you describe. I love the title and how it's applied. This is a poem to make anyone swoon, for sure, but more than that, it's beauty is to be remembered Liz |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Sometimes when I forget that I'm only 18, I remember some things like this that I've never experienced. Reading this was better than sex. But since I haven't had sex, I imagine most things still are better than sex. *grins* Loved your imagery...I was so there. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~Sigh~ and a big one at that This is so incredibly beautiful Mark...well penned, well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!! My regards, Sudhir |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, the weekly meeting of the MBOOPAS, will now come to order, or I'll punish you all by reading you mine instead. (Ahhh now that's brought this rowdy group to order)Here are their comments in order that I got them. I was first, And I think this is the very very best, Marsha go away I want to whisper something back to Mark. ************* Daphne (What am I going to do with her?) That's not fair, Daphy got to go first, and I was. I love it, more than you do Sue (Don't argue with her it'll make her worse) Oh WOW that is sooooo amazing, I love this Kelsy Not as much as I do. (Daphnie, please be quiet, he knows you like it!, okay you adore it.) This makes me feel quite hot Delia Love this one Jan Can I go home early, this is really something. Fran (No you can't!) Wonderful this is my favourite one Pat This is such a great poem David Phew, someone open a window Great work Mel (You touch that window and I will push you through it!) Okay you lot back to work and no slacking!! They all love this one, and you already know that I do. A really beautiful and passionate piece. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
MArk, you make my heart beat just a bit faster with this!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ you know I have Auburn hair don't you............ ..........just stopping in to let my heart flutter before I get back to work.....*SIGH* kisses -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, Daphne and Sue, have insisted on having this on the screen through their whole shift. And they want me to tell you that they have actually enjoyed work today because of it. (They've enjoyed it because they haven't done any.) No seriously I've managed to get them to do some. Anyway they both send you their thanks and lots of sighs. Take care Mushy Marsha (What will I do with them?!!) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is very hot Mark, a wonderful use of image and emotion, great work. Regards Olias |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I think we need a separate crown (King of 'hot') assuming we craft one - you'll be the current holder - and besides - it has your talent all through it - into my treasure box! |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
It's as if we were both writing of the same woman, I couldn't have penned a more appropriate verse for what I'm feeling. I enjoyed this.< !signature--> Andrew [This message has been edited by Highlander (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Mark! Just me stoppin' by for another read!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
wow mark... you the man. I'm glad i'm not a woman, cause I hate to swoon and sigh for another man's poetry... So i'll be safe and just say, amazing... which is hardly a worthy discription. Parker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, had to come back to this one tonight of all nights. I'm in serious need of something to make my night fly by. Considering the images that this gives me, I'd say this was jus the perscription for what ails me tonight. (And Daphnie doesn't appreciate this half as much as I do!) This is really such a beautiful poem, and I really do love it.Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark, sweetie~ Please drop by the local hardware store and pick up one of the new-fangled thermometers that was used to check the temperature on this one - /pip/Forum43/HTML/000122.html After all - Oven temperatures may vary and I think it will come in handy for your next roasting ! I have a coupon ! *winking* and *hugging* and *missing* you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, I can't believe I missed this beauty. Definitely a keeper. D Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Do you KNOW how *tickled* I am at seeing this one make the daily board ??? Smiling with *remember*~ Ya' know .... it's as GORGEOUS as it was the first read !!!! *Huglets* my friend~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
An amazing gift from an amazing poet. We are lucky D |
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