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my malaise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a tether tied in indecision avoiding life its imprecision Hallucination called a vision? or is it just the other way... no fight, no flight, no demonstrations enough to find some short salvation I tire of these explanations I pray for strength of faith to pray... A wish for words of absolution the gift to write sweet resolution A yearning yield to soul's solution My spirit beckoning, "come play..." too weary, to fight, my malaise... too tired to brush tears away. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
serenity sen senorita second to last stanza rules as does it all |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
This is a wonderful poem serene pulls me in so many different directions. Well done Rich |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
A great poem to bring so many thought's out. Life is so simple and then we make it so complex. I look forward to reading more. I'm new to the board. Roger |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A wish for words of absolution the gift to write sweet resolution A yearning yield to soul's solution My spirit beckoning, "come play..." too weary, to fight, my malaise... too tired to brush tears away. ==================== sen this is so sweetly you... and this is so much a mirror ..as always you have defined these emotions to the letter.... and I know baby...I know... we are all moths waiting for our turn to fly like butterflies .... reminded me a bit of a fav song.......one line in particular...*** Falling Down Vetical Horizon Where does the time go Spinning my wheels Standing still It's like running on ice I only gain a little distance when I fall How did I become a molecule In the concrete of this city Indifferent to my endless motion In a space too small to see Nonetheless expected to be I only get a little attention when I fall Chorus: And I'm falling Falling down Falling Falling down Cursed with reason In a world so defiant Without conclusion This is the story The story we live out And it is the moral too Look at me I'm falling for you Shaking, crying Hating lying to myself ***I'm tired of telling myself it's OK To be this tired*** This sick and tired of the turns the world takes And the people that it makes us be And lately it appears to me that Chorus I'm falling down... go out and play in the sunshine...or a moonbeam..which ever one suits your mood (or sleep pattern)  *kisskiss* love you my twin...muchly me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*waiting out here in the moonlight. . .* *"Can serenity come out to play?"* ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en...this is perfectly soft...felt like you were whispering it in the dark...great writing my friend~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks much to everyone...I do appreciate, as always your kind generosity!!! Thanks again. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I had to look up malaise in the dictionary. *grins* I especially like one lil ol line in particular, "I pray for strength of faith to pray..." That is so true. I was watching Dogma the other night, and some of the things they made fun of in that movie were so true. When I get around to forcing myself to go to church I see people who are there out of habit instead of to find spiritual guidance. That is what I will pray for when I go to church now. Instead of world peace (which truthfully would be boring), I'll pray for the strength of faith to pray. Luvdit, luvdit lots! -me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
serenity, not even chicken soup will help, this I know... but I can offer Kleenex...and a shoulder...and a hug... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me masked buddy--when ya looked up malaise in the dictionary, did ya find my pic posted there? you made me smile again lovie...thank you Karilea...(I do love typing that...pure poetry) thank you much, lady....hugs |
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