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Dreaming. . . but not really. . .
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Dreaming. . . but not really. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I must be dreaming because you're here with me I can see your face I can hear your voice I can feel your touch. . . it's all like a dream come true I must be dreaming because you're not here with me I can't see your face I can't hear your voice I can't feel your touch. . . it's all like a nightmare I'm not dreaming because you're here with me I see your face I hear your voice I feel your touch. . . it's not a dream. . . . . . it's real ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, so happy for you if it is real. Wonderful words. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I believe that I have begun to live my dream and my dream is beautiful.. I hope your dreams have embraced you...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven.....I am so happy for you....your joy shows in this poem! I hope she treats you with all the love and caring that you so deserve..... You have always been a Knight in Shining Armour....... Many Blessings and hugs! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven this brought back some memories for me. Do you remember the song, Is This Real, from the movie Practical Magic? I thought about that song as I read this and that happens to be a real favorite of mine. Thanks so much for sharing this my friend. Glad it's real for you. Juls |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wonderful poem Sven, hopefully it is all real and not a dream  enjoyed! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm happy for you my friend, wonderful news, and wonderful work as always.. Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sandra, thank you. . . just a dream though. . . James, my friend, I hope that your dreams come true. . . you deserve it. . .thank you. . . Sunny1, I'm no Knight, just a simple poet. . . thank you my friend. . . Juls, yes I do know that song. . . and I can see where you would have that come to mind. . . thank you my friend DA, it's still a dream, but thank you still! Isis, thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven - I have recently found out how wonderful it is when this dream comes true and I pray that yours are too. Wonderful write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir Knight...I must confess your tales of old I like best... and when you talk Shakesperian that's when I come hurrying to read and read... but this was good too! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a wonderful world, to sleep and dream the thoughts we wish through daylight hours ... beautiful dreamy sentiments Sven! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Well, if you ever had a dream come true ... this would be the one I'd pick for you ! I like your romanticism ... always. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Very simply put. I enjoyed these words. I am many. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
rp25, so glad that you know. . .and thank you my friend. . . Lady Sunshine, I am honored that thou dost liketh mine tales of olde. . . but sometimes, even I have to come back to right now. . . thank you. . . Kit, if only we could dream this way all the time. . . thank you. . . Marge, thank you my friend. . . you never know. . . and I'm glad that my Romanticism speaks to you. . . Siofra, thank you. . . just a simple thought. . . from a simple person. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the beauty of your words, always a pleasure to read GE |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sven,my friend,always loved reading your poetry!!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You dream pretty good. Enjoyed the read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GE, thank you. . . the feeling is mutual. . . vandana, thank you my friend. . . I have always enjoyed reading yours as well!! Sy, I even dream in color! Thank you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Without our dreams, we are nothing....... An excellent write my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Dream a little dream of me...Lovely poem, Sven! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is beautiful...Nicely penned too!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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