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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Poetic Sup ~*Marge Tindal*~ The sun goes down The moon comes up I drink my fill from poetic cup A laugh ~ a smile a tear ~ a sigh One more heart-felt lullabye On star wished in deepest sigh beckoning love to come Folding dreams in satin pillows until the morning dawns The moon goes down The sun comes up Sweetened is my morning cup overflowing with poetic sup ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Moon lights muse so wonderfully identified. nice Marge jon |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Good morning, Marge- love this.  a wonderful start to myvery early morning. love, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is great, your poems are always so well written and so beatifully presented. I love this.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a sweet brew Can I have a cup? Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JonM~ Thank you, sweets. Glad you enjoyed it. Vicky~ Glad to share a morning sup with a friend. Marsha~ Thank you. That's a heck of a nice thing to say. Elizabeth, my friend~ Anytime it's brewed ... you are just the right sweetner ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 See you on the 'morrow, my friend... {~,^} Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"The moon goes down The sun comes up Sweetened is my morning cup overflowing with poetic sup" The sun goes down The moon rises up None sweeter are the words I read Than those from Marge when her pen bleeds ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge this is so beautiful, what more can I say except "you rock girl"  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I could drink this to the dregs even without the sweetener yours words bring. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Wilfred~ Thanks for the poetic reply of rhyme ! Tracie~ All this rocking is addictive ! Love you. Kethry~ Bottoms up ! ... thanks my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge, my friend, I have read this at least ten times today and have been trying so hard to come up with a poetic reply for you but I don't know where the hell my muse went. Have you seen her. I say her because a cowboy has to have a female muse don't he? Please forgive my not being able to come up with one but know that I loved it all the same. You spill words so easily and I wish I had that back. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was beautiful. Sounds like the daily life of a poet if ya ask me. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was beautiful. Sounds like the daily life of a poet if ya ask me. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge!! The world would be pretty dreary without it!! Denise |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
No wonder I'm putting on the weight all this poetic sup! This was quite clever Marge, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Wonderful as always my friend!! Now, where can I get a cup like that?  Sounds like a great treat!! Love ya, Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Glad you liked it enough to want second helpings !! Denise~ Now isn't that the truth ! RoseBud~ Available next month in non-fattening flavors ! LoneWolf~ Turn left at www.netpoets.com Cozy little place on the corner ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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