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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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just another unposted challenge. dg supplied me with the rhyming words and let me do the rest.  hope you like. _______________________________ since that precious day when our sweet love was born bright eyes and broad smiles my face do adorn when we're together we share joy and laughter and gently you hold me till each sunrise after and when to agree we at times hesitate our trust in each other will help mediate this love we two share will soar freely forever as soft as a prayer on wings of a zephyr -vlraynes < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Very well done. Trust is the essence of real love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You've done it again ! Wonderful ! The challenge becomes you sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very nice, Vicky. How DO you do it? Is any challenge too tough for you to make something beautiful? Apparently not! hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
when we're together we share joy and laughter and gently you hold me till each sunrise after ... *sigh* ... so beautiful... WEEDOGGIES! you da man..oops.. i mean..the WOMAN! this is awesome ..you filled in the missing meat very well!! ..dont ya just love that word "zephyr"!!!  ok...working on some more of this for you no more slumps for you..you just wait..we'll keep you writing if all you need is a few words to start off an idea!  "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- thanks so much, my friend. glad you liked it. Marge- i just can't help it...i love a challenge. so glad you enjoyed this one. hugs to you Marilyn- thank you, sweet friend. i just get a kick out of a good challenge. i really find it alot of fun. glad you enjoyed this one. dg- lol...yeah...get it right!!! i definitely NOT da MAN...lol. thanks for 'awesome'...and yes... i do like that word..'zephyr' keep those challenges rolling in...lol. glad you liked this one. big hugs to you. thanks all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I really like the title of this one too .. looks like dg is gonna have to give you some harder rhymes next time... this one was too easy...  great way to help get thru the dreaded poets curse ...loss of muse. lovely sincere verse Vicky take care jm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sometimes those poetry challenges bring out the best A very dear poem was created from this one Challenge well met! Liz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
such a sweet response to a challenge...great write |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, do you know what? I think ... no, I know that I really love this piece of yours. I have read it many times now and finally caught my breath and decided to tell you how much I love it but I still don't have the proper words. So, how good are you at mind reading my friend? Do you think you can find out by searching my soul a bit? You just get better as time goes on my friend. Love it and sending hugs and love to my poet friend that wrote it too. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Janet Marie- thanks so much... you're so right...the challenges do help wake up the sleeping muse.. so glad you enjoyed this one. Liz- and they're fun too! thanks so much, my friend. glad you like Paula- thanks so much for the kind words. so happy you liked it. Mark- you've got me smiling big with your sweet words... searching your soul as i type and liking what i see... ...thank youso much, my friend... you have truly made my day love and warm hugs back to you. thanks all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OkayFriendGirl~ Now ... while under strict medical care  ...I challenge you to best this one - How ? ... one might ask ??? ... Well, One ... by using this well-turned question ~ 'So, how good are you at mind reading ?' Now ... dust off the crystal ball and get the VickyGypsy in high gear~  Sometimes ... ya' just gotta rise to the challenge !! The time is NOW ! Love, hugs .... n' Percocet *giggles*~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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