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Whispered in the Wind |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 My name you whispered in the wind, that blew across the sea… You stood upon the landings end, and sent your love to me… Your thoughts were sent within my name, of how you love me true… And wishes that I feel the same… To make your dreams come true… Across the ocean, here I stand… I wait with open heart… I hold my love within my hand, to send you back a part… The wind has whispered in my ear, your words, with all your love… And from my eye there falls a tear… Seen by our God above… Upon the wind, our whispers fly, to meet and join as one… One love, as free-birds in the sky… Our flight has just begun…  Follow your dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Sunny girl...love that stands the test of time and distance...whispered on the winds...beautiful just beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny, seems like everyone is whispering softly of late... this is lovely, but we expect nothing else from an artist such as yourself... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SUNNY1, this is soooooo great, it flows so gently, verse after verse after verse. Geez Gurl, your talented pen and loving heart just keeps me smiling and sighing and well sometimes I get tears in eyes too  Coco Its a keeper 4 my library sweetie! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Paula ~~~ Thank you, and I am so glad that this can bring a smile to you today! This is how love should feel, I think...  ~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Thank you for such a high compliment, and it made my day!! Yes.....maybe it is time to whisper, then listen... Follow your dream! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem here Sunny.. loved the mental images you painted with words. The wind is always such a poet's gift because it can't be seen but the effects of it can be felt so strongly. It's a wonderful vehicle for mystery and magical expression and you used it very well here...very good!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ Oh.....you are always such a good friend to say such nice things......I do appreciate your replies, and I hope the tear this brought was a happy one! Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ ethome ~~~ I thank you, my friend....I love to read your thoughts also, in poems or replies. We think alike, as I have always appreciated the mystical force of the wind and Nature in general. Follow your dream! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another beautiful poem, Sunny. Can love really travel on the winds, do you think? S |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ Yes.....it can. All one has to do is open their heart to it. The wind is like time...it is there, but we can't control it, nor can we change it......it is beyond human reach, but touches us, nonetheless! Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Perhaps you heard me whispering? A very enchanting poem of a lady's yearning. Andrew |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ you write with such longing and such wanting.....this is so soft......  -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Highlander ~~~ Yes....perhaps....My heart is always turned toward my Scottish roots. Thank you for hearing my whisper! ~~~ SEA ~~~ I cannot help but write what I feel, and I thank you, my good friend, for joining me in thoughts! Follow your dream! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, Your words flooded my thoughts with my very own love...Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of your heart. (the painting at the opening of this piece is wonderful) Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully written..and heartfelt Sunny.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Robert Joseph ~~~ Oh, I am so glad that I could help you to feel love today......that, to me, is the best part of writing. You get back so much more than you put in, it seems! Thank you! ~~~ Victoria ~~~ Thank you, and also for being one who 'feels' what I am trying to say. That is especially important to me.....so I value your work and your replies very much! Follow your dream! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is so very lovely!!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ A Whisper's Caress ~~~ Considering your name, I think this one ought to belong to you!!! Consider it yours, and I thank you for giving it a good home!!! Follow your dream! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So tender and soft Sunny this is just beautiful~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lil sis, hey you where were you hiding this one, and why didn't I see it before. This is gorgeous love utterly beautiful and I love it. A very good week for whispers, this is wonderful sis a really great piece. Take care love Bubbles Be good  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Bubbles ~~~ This one was so quiet, it just snuck on by you!!! Thank you, big sis!! Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Butterflies ~~~ Thank you, my friend......as a butterfly, you have also glided on the whispers of the wind!! Follow your dream! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Across the ocean, here I stand… I wait with open heart… I hold my love within my hand, to send you back a part… sunny1..this is wonderful!..and written so beautifully.. hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I so love this! Your images are clearly formed, and I'm not just talking about the graphics you got up there. *grins* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
dg..... Oh, thank you, my friend, and I'm glad you enjoyed this!! Masked Intruder..... Ah....I see you are an insightful person, and I thank you for getting the clear picture that I and my muse sometimes hide within the words. Poetry, to me, is like a good detective story....there's always more there than meets the eye, and it's for the reader to find!! Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Lyrical,lilting and gentle as a warm breeze on that calm sea. If you have the voice, I have the guitar. Excellent and enjoyable, thanks for sharing. Regards Olias |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Olias ~~~ As a matter of fact, I write and perform songs, and I thought this one would maybe make a nice addition to my stage material. What kind of music do you like to play? (Thank you for your reply, also!! )Follow your dream! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I just knew there had to be a song writer in you. I would definatly use this as a basis for a song. As far as the music I like to play, any thing from Stevie Ray to Stevie Nicks I dont mind as long as theres a check in it lol. Regards Olias |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Whispers have no trouble traversing distances that shouts cannot imagine - Beautiful sunny - I love the artwork as well -it's perfect |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny1, I don't know how I missed this one before. 'Sbeautiful, lovely one and so are you. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't know how I missed this the first time through. BRAVO! [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Lovely, and with the pictures you have added for effect, make it Absolutely Lovely! One suggestion, as I read this, "Seen by our God above" I find that it reads good without the 'our' in it. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Olias ~~~ Yes....I know how getting the check in music goes!! And I play a bit of everything, too, on my synth.....even some techno. (Love Stevie Ray, and any blues.) Oh, thank you for liking this one...I enjoy writing songs! ~~~ Wilfred ~~~ Sometimes the softness spoken from our hearts carries the furthest, you are right. I thank you so much, my friend..... ~~~ Kethry ~~~ So good to see you today! And I'm really glad that you enjoyed this poem... ~~~ Interloper ~~~ It's ok if you missed it, because you're here now!! Good to see you, and thank you!! ~~~ Dragonpoe ~~~ I appreciate the suggestion, but I left the 'our' in as it signifies the two seperated lovers sharing everything from whispers to the same God. But thank you...I'm always open to suggestions!! Follow your dream! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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