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Tonight my love......
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
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 Tonight my love.... Tonight my love, I will seduce you, weave you in my fiery hue, I will be your defiant challenge, planned to take you out of balance. Tonight my love, I will pour delighted elixir, created in romantic atmosphere, brewed with sweet taste of desire, mixed with sin and hidden fire. Tonight my love, I will serve your dish, covered with a naughty bliss, prepared with spicy ingredients, twill slowly melt your self command. Tonight my love, I'll be your ice cream, on top delicious whipped cream, decorated with exotic fruit, twill hold on your loving mood. Tonight my love, we will explore, this table of love hide so much more, enjoy the food till satisfied, tonight my love we'll share the night. Charisma |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ WOW!!!!  LOVE this! Oh so very sensous.......ahhhhhhh  -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
brewed with sweet taste of desire, mixed with sin and hidden fire. Tonight my love, I will serve your dish, covered with a naughty bliss, prepared with spicy ingredients, twill slowly melt your self command. ============ Wow. I love this presentation. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW......tonight it is my friend. Whew.....what a promise from you. You ain't playing fair!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma, a passionate feast you've penned I enjoyed reading your poem PoetFriend  Coco |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There are word ribbons of hot passion flowing all through the metaphors in this one... quite a feast you have planned for that lucky guy....I sure hope he lives through it because it sounds like it's going to be a wild one......I thoroughly enjoyed the read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
SEA: Im really glad that you love this one Interloper: well thank you that you love the presentation... Mark: honey I always play fair..though....and yes it will be tonight......... Cocobaci: I am glad that you enjoyed the feast, my poetfriend.... Ethome: don't worry, he will survive.....and I'm glad that you enjoyed the read |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a delicious night in store for sure haa.. nicely written charisma.. loving visual too~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Tonight my love I'll be your ice cream." I love rocky road with lots of nuts and marshmellows and that rich creamy chocolate that melts in your mouth so perfectly..you have made me so hungry for love...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Victoria: haa you know it.... ..thanks for your kind reply jimlee: "Tonight my love, I'll be your ice cream,".....  hope it will still your hunger a bit.... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, What an awesome poem. I loved every word. Beautifully written. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is so seductively promising. Girl .. you got it going on ! I LOVE IT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- wow...what a deliciously sensual write! sounds like you've got quite a night ahead of you, girl. i love this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel: Thank you for your lovely reply, I am glad that you love it Marge: Thank you for this great reply, it's always good to know that you love it. Vicky: Glad that you love this one, thank you for your *wow* and kind reply |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
In my opinion...seduction should start with coffee in the morning and go until the late hours of the evening...I think I may have to print this one out and use if for future inspiration...lol Great Writing..and your graphic is beautiful~ |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Then I shall be early for the feast! A very sensual poem. Andrew |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it!!!!!!!!! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Charisma, Desire screams loudly from your words...Very Good! Robert Joseph |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Butterfly'sDC: I agree with you too, in the morning Hot and Strong Coffee...mmm...that's the way I love it....  and I am honoured that you want to print this one out, for future inspiration.... Highlander: well than I will see you soon here.... thank you for your reply vandana: I'm glad that you like it... Robert J: oh my goodness, was it that loud....glad you heared me.....*blush* |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Sweet Dove, "Tonight my love, I will seduce you, weave you in my fiery hue, I will be your defiant challenge, planned to take you out of balance." WOW! "Tonight my love, I will pour delighted elixir, created in romantic atmosphere, brewed with sweet taste of desire, mixed with sin and hidden fire." I tell you I'm on fire right now! "Tonight my love, I will serve your dish, covered with a naughty bliss, prepared with spicy ingredients, twill slowly melt your self command." Serve it up, Baby! "Tonight my love, I'll be your ice cream, on top delicious whipped cream, decorated with exotic fruit, twill hold on your loving mood." Thanks for the ice cream. I'm so hot right now. "Tonight my love, we will explore, this table of love hide so much more, enjoy the food till satisfied, tonight my love we'll share the night." I love to explore. This is very hot, Charisma. I am soaked with sweet sweat. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I thought I had replied to this, it's very sensual! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Kathleen for your kind reply, and for stopping by |
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