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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-11-09 10:02 AM



Time all too quickly flies when
we are together or talking.
Time slows to a crawl when we are apart.
I think if
we
shared the rest of our lives
together,
years would flash by as seconds and
we
will have grown old
together.
I believe no matter how fast time should fly,
we
will have enjoyed that journey
together.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2000-11-09 10:06 AM


It feels so good to know that I am growing old with the one I love. Yes time does fly by so enjoy it and make memories to keep you company.
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-11-09 10:14 AM


Yes.....when you're happy and sharing love and life,  the time is never enough. All we have is one day at a time. Wonderful thoughts expressed here, and good to read!!


Follow your dream!


Charisma
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3 posted 2000-11-09 11:04 AM


I love this thought.....we.....together....will have grown old together.....
wonderful wish.....thanks for sharing

Charisma

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4 posted 2000-11-09 11:06 AM


together is one of the nicest words ever invented ...*s...I enjoyed your thoughts

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ethome
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5 posted 2000-11-10 03:13 PM


the time flys by like the seasons turn over and it's great to be able to read it from a poet's point of view....very insightful!!
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6 posted 2000-11-13 03:27 PM


inot2B - Wow, "memories to keep you company" ... you oughta do something with that.

Sunny1 - Time is never enough.  Thanx.

Charisma - My pleasure  )

nakdthoughts - Thank you very much.

ethome - High praise indeed.  Many thanx.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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7 posted 2000-11-13 03:29 PM


inot2B - Wow, "memories to keep you company" ... you oughta do something with that.

Sunny1 - Time is never enough.  Thanx.

Charisma - My pleasure  )

nakdthoughts - Thank you very much.

ethome - High praise indeed.  Many thanx.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2000-11-13 03:57 PM


I know those times, and I have a feeling I am going to be enjoying future works from you, to keep time from going oh too fast...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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9 posted 2000-11-14 12:45 PM


Sunshine~
Thanks for the read. I hope I live up to your lofty standards.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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with you
10 posted 2000-11-14 01:42 PM


I've tried to reply to this twice, this is the third go,my computer kept crashing......I just want to tell you, I really liked this......now I hope it makes it this time   -SEA
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11 posted 2000-11-14 01:52 PM


SEA, you made it, and isn't he something?...BTTT with this....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 2000-11-14 11:11 PM


Simply perfect and exactly how it should be with the one you love...excellent writing~
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13 posted 2000-11-16 08:53 AM


SEA ~
Thanks for the tenacity and the read.

Sunshine ~
Now I KNOW it's a blush and not sunburn.

BDC ~
I don't know about perfect.  However, I will agree with simple.  Heartfelt thanks.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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