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Weave of the Heart |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Words mean nothing until you add the heart Like the sun without the sky to place it Dreams without hope for it to start or a candle without darkness to be lit Words without heart are hollow Like love with no where for it to grow Treasures to find with no map to follow or a sunset with no horizon for it to glow Words woven without a thread of heart pale Like the finest lace laying tattered and torn Letters confessing your love lost in the mail A baby in your dreams that will never be born Words void of heart cannot fill a soul Like tender kisses without a cheek to land Empty arms with no embrace to make it whole Walks by the ocean without the warm sand So before you weave the words you want to say Find the most important thread before you start You’re words will mean so much more that way For words are empty without your heart [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Much wisdom and truth you have woven into your words here. Words are never empty when they flow straight from the heart, take care my friend. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ this is so pretty.....I agree, if you don't speak or write from the heart, I just don't see how they could hold any true meaning.  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Only the heart can pump the blood To bring the flowers to rebud. Very nice. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BDC...this is wonderful...very lovely...and spoken from the heart... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its true bdc straight from the mouth startin from the heart good job here yuh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Beautiful words of wisdom. From the heart ~ It's just what we poets do ~ Is there any other way to weave ? Nah ! It's the only way to go ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly a poem full of much wisdom and truth. simply beautiful and heartfelt! then again all of your poems are. loved the title of this and especially the message. take care. ~amy~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words void of heart cannot fill a soul Like tender kisses without a cheek to land Empty arms with no embrace to make it whole Walks by the ocean without the warm sand So before you weave the words you want to say Find the most important thread before you start You’re words will mean so much more that way For words are empty without your heart ================ your words are wisdom kissed me sweet SS.. and I love the way you worked these metaphors... (must mean your a poet huh)  so very true is this poems moral and intent .. one of the many gifts of poetry is that we can speak our hearts with our pens. way cool poem girlie-girl.. (definatly NOT a Loreal moment) LOL  hehe*kisskiss* me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That is the best poetic advice I've heard in awhile, oh wise winged one!!! Thank you!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how beautifully spoken from your heart~ always a pleasure... Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...yep girl...but something a lot of people dont do...and they sure cause a lot of pain...great write sweet lady Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
May I simply leave this old one for you and leave it at that? I think you know what the new words would be anyway my friend, do you not? Do I ? Do I need to say the words... when you can feel it in my heart The longing in the breaths I take... every second we are apart Do I need to write the words... when I pick out a card just for you As tears of joy stream down my face As each day I know that overnight it grew Do I need to carve it in stone... for all the world to rejoice in this With heartfelt dreams and memories Carrying the photographs of our bliss Do I need to surround you... in rose petal baths and walks at night Holding you in my arms as we kiss the stars and gaze upon the splendor of heaven's light Do I need to put it down in rhyme... so you will know the strength of it all Knowing all along that you need not speak for me to feel when you are forced behind a wall Do I need those three little words... for you to know...do they mean that much Or are you happy sharing all the sensations when our hearts are joined with the slightest touch No I think not... as you show me each and every day That this bond we have connecting us continues to grow and strengthen in every way Mark Bohannan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Holly- this is so beautiful and so full of truth and wisdom. if it's not from the heart, it means nothing...empty words. wonderfully expressed, my friend. hugs to you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful heart- write of wisdom, sweet butterfly. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you have said it all....words mean nothing until you add the heart...wise words.. wonderful penned....I love it.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My sincere thanks to each and every one of you...I made a promise on my first post here at Passions to always speak from my heart..you have allowed me to keep that promise with ease for each one of you show by example that it is safe for me to do so and not be condemed for what's in my heart...thank you all. **AW Hugs & BF Kisses** |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your poetry of late, has showm such strength and revised love. Holly, this is beautiful and full of truth from heart. just remember to be patient, for you both are experiencing new found feelings. just my opinition though... Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, This was awesome work my friend!! So true . . . each and every word. Speak what is in your heart and you speak the absolute truth with all that you are. Loved this. Hope all is well with you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marina* Thank you so much...your opinion does matter to me, although these feelings aren't new...after 10 years of marriage..we just feel like newlyweds as my poetry of late has shown LOL...re-discovery is a very good thing  Nice to see you pop in from time to time We've missed you!!LW* Thank you my friend...I hope all is well and that you are taking care of you! |
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