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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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One Small Simple Step < !signature-->One small simple step I watch my world disappear Quickly vanishing in the horizon Becoming nothing but fond memories One small simple step I take to be closer to you Seeing my future in you eyes Seeing eternity in the love that we share One small simple step Begins a bright adventure A journey through life with you Making new memories to fill my heart One small simple step To join our two hearts as one Souls connected always and forever Growing with our love and with our strength One small simple small step To lead me to where I want to be To stand by your side as long as I live To cherish you everyday that you’re with me. ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One small simple step Two hearts residing in wind Blown against doors of screen Wisping through with warming embrace Lovely write my friend. One step at a time is that proper place to take it. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Thank you stopping in  I'm glad you liked it I'm sorry I have been away for so long, writing has not been coming very easily to me lately. I think I am slowly overcoming this writer's block that has been chasing me. Hopefully I will be posting more. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This is such a beautiful dedication to love, and the one you love. Beautiful. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This would make lovely wedding vows! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rosepetals-- this was beautiful...and also just the type of poem i needed to read this evening. thank you! here's to taking it "one step at a time." a very beautiful write! take care. ~amy~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love is so wonderful......and this is a lovely tribute for your love. you have penned it with love in your heart, and we hear and feel that through your words.....lovely piece. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great rp25. . . so warm and caring. . . Excellent my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
rosepetals- this is beautiful. i enjoyed reading it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for your nice words. I'm glad you liked it. I apologize for the time it took to respond.. life has been very hectic on this end. |
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