Open Poetry #10 |
On the Edge of Spring |
Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Beneath the blanket of winter lie wonders to behold. Waiting for an awakening, Is the sleeping warmth of beauty. As the sun moves closer to kiss the horizon, Days grow gloriously longer. Curiously the crocus peek , from the below the melting layers. Eyes wide with each new discovery, We greet them joyously , Brushing back the snows to give them room. They reply with a smile, And bloom. We step back in awe, On the edge of spring. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Ron, A beautiful write, I enjoyed the beauty you portray. "We step back in awe, On the edge of spring". Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
even tho winter is just beginning, this gives precious hope for a beauteous spring... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A teaser this is... I WANT SPRING... This is well done, Ron... Nice job.. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
We have had only 2 days of winter so far in South Texas, and I'm ready for SPRING to pop up. Thank you for reminding me it's around the corner. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely ron..i was enjoying the autumn here in north texas but the snow put a damper on it ha..looking forward to the spring now. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi Ron. "Brushing back the snows to give them room." ~~ what a completely melodic line I enjoyed this lovely look at the anticipation of Spring very much today, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You give me hope on this grey and blustery day. I am definitely NOT a winter person at all. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have to admit that this time of year is my favorite but the beauty of spring is well received as well and you make it sound more than just inviting. Wonderfully penned my friend. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ron, you make me long for early spring with this beauty! Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Can't wait till spring will begin... love and enjoyed reading this one.. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ Wait!! I want a long cold winter!! I can't even think about spring yet This is beautiful. -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A real vivid beauty to this write....nice job for sure Ron! |
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