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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Moonlight Whispers - A Heart Sighs Mark- and- Marge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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MarkB~ Moonlight Whispers Marge~ A Heart Sighs ~ In the moonlight we find our destined dance ~ Once more leading to the edge ~ Resting in the winds of two lover's chance ~ touching the star-tinseled ledge ~ Breezes of sensuous nature soon to take hold ~ Billowing with rapturous delight ~ As this true friendship's story begins to unfold ~ the closer you come in the night ~ A walk in the innocence of midnight's chime ~ resounding sounds of the heart ~ A whisper sent through the bluegrass of time ~ falling of cupid’s dart ~ Time over eternity will be set to our own pace ~ whispered with fervent prayer ~ Until the time we are able to dance face to face ~ ever beloved wait I will bear ~ Two hands entwined in the light of Autumn's moon ~ Holding on for all time ~ Cupping the tender moments of winter to come soon ~ when knowing of hearts soon entwine ~ Tingles of sensations find fingertips in passionate haste ~ a moment meant for just who we are ~ Two hearts finding love within the lips of tender taste ~ what a sweet sensation you are ~ Rush not where tiptoe's silence is much better spent ~ remain in the echoes of time ~ Seek not the meaning of what is surely heaven sent ~ rest in the love light sublime ~ Hair flowing in the breezes of this chill kissed night ~ knowing the desire of this heart so true ~ As warmth is found in the eyes of true love's might ~ hold me in the sureness of you ~ *MarkB~, I thank you for your whispers ~ They are met with my sighs. ~*Marge*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Fantastic folks! Melded together like they were/are meant to be. Beautiful. jwesley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge you two are quite a team...this is absolutely beautiful the lines and the metaphors rich with adjectives of delight... just a great job congrats to you both... ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOHHH I was so hoping you would post this... yes....a perfect collaboration of whisper and sigh ... and most enjoyed as I inhale it in  excellent Margie-gator ... ah....sweet inspiration later-sigh-gator jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* I'm in awe of this...how very beautiful the way you have woven your work with Mark's...it's absolutely beautiful! Your talent never ceases to amaze me my friend~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge and Mark--what a delectable combination...separate the lines are lovely, together suburb...I love it!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I will honor this poem with a beautiful response as soon as I conquer these jealous feelings ;( |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- wow!! i love what you've done with this.  i already loved Mark's poem; and, now, with your words gently woven into it, it's pure gold. wonderful job, my friend. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. With inspiration from Mark's lovely verse - I found the response pulled from me. ETHome~ I appreciate your thoughts and I'm sure Mark does too. Inspiration is such a wonderful thing to share. JanetMarie~ Thanks, hon. You are so encouraging to us. I appreciate you. ButterfliesDC~ Thank you for your sweet reply. As you know ... he's loaded with talent and I appreciate that we can share this one. Martie~ I believe we both knew that you would like it. Thank you, sweet friend. Balladeer~ Love you.Vicky~ Thank you for the reply, hon. I appreciate you letting me know that you liked the weave ... means a lot to me and I'm sure to Mark. We BOTH appreciate you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge & Mark-- this is just simple beautiful you two. i already thought you both have an amazing talent...but woven together I now see its more than just talent... it's pure magic. Enjoyed this very much, and am hoping you two will consider doing another poem together. take care. ~amy~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, Mark, what a pair! Beauty and faith, a wonderful combination... this is in the library, as well as in my own book, for a keepsake, just in case the computers crash in 2001! Applauding...applauding...to the two poet laureates of Passions... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ A perfect duet, by two beautiful souls. Simply beautiful. Deb |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~n~Mark~ You both have to know how beautiful and so creative this is......I just kept sighing...... -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You have woven a trinity of rhyme A lovers ring to last throughout time. Wonderful *L* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is stunningly beautiful, Mark this is utterly divine, meshed together to make something so magical so awesome. I feel as if my soul was lying in an angels arms, and these words were breathed in my ear by a seraphim. This is wonderous, too amazing for me to put into words. I knew you were both extremely talented, and superb poets but this transcends that and becomes more than the total of the sum. This is so it's so...... Sigh I LOVE THIS Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge.....this is really amazing and so romantic......SIGH I will thread this one to my library.... superb as always....I only wish that I have more time to be online....can't reply on all the good poems anymore....*sigh*.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
This gave me CHILLS! Marge, Mark, WOW! Beautiful, enchanting, flawless! I am in awe... together you create something almost magical. Bravo! ~ Beth |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely write Mark and Marge..nicely done you two are a couple of sweet M&M's ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Thanks for enjoying it so. I'm just glad that Mark let me tiptoe through his thoughts. Karilea~ *Hugs* to you my friend. You know how this one came to be - and we're pleased you like it. Thank you. BloomingRose~ Well, Mark sang lead and I just hummed along with my heart. SEA~ Thank you sweet lady. Mark's thoughts had that effect on me too. Seymour~ Thank you dear, dear poet. Marsha~ Oh ... what lovely accolades. I think Mark takes a bow - and I'll just curtsey. Thank you, Marsha. Charisma~ I'm glad you caught this one. We miss your sweet smile ... *hugs* to you. ElizabethCor~ Mark led the dance ... I just floated in his arms. Victoria~ Oh .. I like that thought ! Thank you. *Thanks everyone .... and *hugs* to Mark for sharing with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge my sweet friend. You have for the first time allowed me to really go back and read and enjoy one of my poems. Your addition to mine is so wonderful and makes mine even seem good to me. I do so love to dance with a good partner and well my sweet, you may just have a full dance card for awhile. I am so honored and so flattered that my words would lead to such a lovely response that I could never show you but the first time I get down to Florida way, I will be more than happy to try  Hugs and love to ya my tender Cherokee angel. ============= To all that read and replied to this.....I am so very appreciative of your lovely and warm comments. I am more than elated to say the least that you all found it so beautiful, but with the addition of Marge to it, well, it did sort of have a guarantee on it now didn't it. Thank you all once again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ You made it easy to be inspired. I pulled your poem up during my lunch break and immediately the words flowed from my heart. The poem you wrote had to be DARNED GOOD to do that ! Thanks for liking the *sighs* ... you're a pretty special fella, you know. Your friendship is special to me and if and when you get to Florida ... we'll have that dance, I promise. *Hugs* for you from me ... Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What a beautiful weaving of two talented poets, that makes the heart sigh.....thank you...*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is breathtakingly beautiful, you two! Just lovely! Denise |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mark & Marge, Absolutely splendid, I loved the combination of you two and your words. AWESOME! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ We both thank you so much. Denise~ Thanks, my friend. Mark is certainly a class act in his devine inspirational penning. It's easy to be inspired by one who is admired by so many friends and poets. Gemini~ We both appreciate your thoughts. So pleased that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh MY! This was breath taking. A lovely duet by two talented writers. Thank-you for sharing with us. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Oh, thank you sooooooooo much for letting us know how much you enjoyed this ! Your kind applause is so appreciated. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well see what I get for being away from here for so long...I miss all the good poems, and double-good on this one!!! I'm glad I went back intot he pages. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My, my, but to be able to weave words so beautifully without even so much as a break in the rythm of the piece but, instead so well woven you can not see the seams, is true poetic art. I commend you both for such craftmanship, well done. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks, Marge. Beautiful. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where are you? please come visit soon again...or better yet, come on home! You are missed and loved! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
How much I enjoyed going back and reading this~ Cowboy ... I miss ya' muches~ *Huglets* wherever you are will find you~  Thanks everyone for your generous applause. MarkB~ ... come home this instant ! ~*CherokeeAngel*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful duet! glad I didn't miss it! where is Mark these days? |
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