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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Perfect Wings" In God's eyes we are all the same Yet everyday you are made to feel pain and shame It breaks my heart in two When I see how people look at you No one is perfect, yet people think they are so high Amazes me how they act like you're not there...and just walk on by I see the tears that fall from your eyes of blue They don't know how special you are...haven't got a clue Let me chase away those tears, I promise forever I will love And never will I take advantage of your gift from above In my eyes, you have perfect wings, and were meant to fly Hope you will take me with you when you set off for the night sky Please dry the tears from your eyes I don't think Angels are suppose to cry If you will let me, I'll love you like you've never been loved before And unlike all the rest...I'll never walk out the door Amy M Kennedy |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Amy, once again you have penned a beautiful expression of your feelings. It never ceases to amaze me that so many can't get beyond the superfical to see the true beauty that is held inside. If you are showing these to your angel then it will be known just special they are.  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, beautifully written, you are so good at writing from your heart love, truly wonderful. This is an absolute classic utterly amazing write, and for you to show your love how much she means to you, is so beautiful. I really love this one, it's so you. Take care sweetie love Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy-girl* This is exactly why you are the angel that I've always said you are...your heart always reaches out to others to hold them and protect them with your love...beautiful work my dear friend~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This is a beautiful declaration of love to some who is special to you. The beauty you see within someone shows how beautiful you are too. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This poem speaks volumes about your heart.....it shines so bright I can see it from here.......wonderful write. Warm Smiles Jenn E |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Let me chase away those tears, I promise forever I will love And never will I take advantage of your gift from above In my eyes, you have perfect wings, and were meant to fly Hope you will take me with you when you set off for the night sky' Another 'wow,' Aim. This is so beautifully expressed. You've got some really excellent lines here, my friend! I love the emotion and loyalty in here! Love it, girlie!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let me chase away those tears, I promise forever I will love And never will I take advantage of your gift from above In my eyes, you have perfect wings, and were meant to fly Hope you will take me with you when you set off for the night sky ================= your pretty perfect too me sweet  this is precious Amy. thank you for the E-mails... I will be in touch soon love ya me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Angels will never cry as long as there are hearts like your's around, me friend. jwesley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with jwesley you show a great heart here in this one....and that is always refreshing and clean the same as this poem.. wonderful words and lines Amy....very very good!! take care...ethome... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Such tender and heartrendering feelings you've expressed from a heart full of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Amy--A tenderly written poem from a beautiful heart...what a joy to read! |
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